Comments by All Members
- "what more can I add to this other than this has to be one of the most raw, and accurate depiction of an act with so many shades....I wish all poetry could live up to this level for my sake of reading...but I myself would never be able to post...well done is by far an understatement, but the best I can offer"
Posted by Ravenblade on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "just came back to peek in on you. Its been too long sir. Much too long"
Posted by Dei on "my name" by edenscancer
- "While I can't even begin to fathom the extent of the pain actually going through this would cause, simply reading this poem made my heart leap out of my chest and run away in an attempt to get away from the agonizing pain that this evokes."
Posted by jodeanna on "wild orchid" by edenscancer
- "I enjoy these longer reads..this was very sorrowful..almost painful to read but so very eloquently put together. Much enjoyed thank u for sharing:)"
Posted by River Lily on "Glue" by edenscancer
- "i wanted to come visit this again. it still crushes me. So sexy, and intense. i miss you! youve been gone too long!"
Posted by Dei on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "It's about creating one for destroying two... Beautiful... Fuck so hard it hurts... I love it!!!"
Posted by Devilish on "thrust" by edenscancer
- "sublime...reading this made me yearn as a ghost; of all the things I might miss when I'm longer here....such sorrow and emptiness, and yet the alliterative aspects of the words kept throwing my mind mind back to one place; one window overlooking the sea; remembering the sounds, the sights...what things taste like. Serious poetry aplomb.....edenscancer; please come back and share more poetry; you are a stellar writer, stop lumbering on the periphery; get back here and immerse....have always loved your poetry efforts. Be well......."
Posted by stryder on "Poltergeists (A rant on Sex and reality)" by edenscancer
- "Have you composed the music already? Great write! I just hope music does complete justice to the lyrics! Give us some more stuff! :)"
Posted by Unknown on "Creature feature" by edenscancer
- "This is truth...and beauty......reality, no sugar coating....in your face reality....great work..."
Posted by boneplate on "5am" by edenscancer
- "Touching. The fact that some in this world do not want to live anymore, either because of their emotions, or in fact, boredom. I've seen it happen. Its sad. Good write tho. It shot close to home for me"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "pins and needles" by edenscancer
- "Awsome to read and visualize. So cool. I dont kno how on earth i've managed to miss your work. ~tsk, tsk~"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "refract" by edenscancer
- "Totally agree with 'warmaprylrain'. even tho, clearly, you were going thru pain, the way you describe it in poetry is beautiful. Write on, cuz you rock man!"
Posted by Ladyhawke on "dearly departed" by edenscancer
- "I dont see how you think this is ugly. Its so freakin beautiful. Your works are so amazing, im speechless when i get done with any of them. "
Posted by Ladyhawke on "5am" by edenscancer
- "Dear god! And how old are you? Someone so young CANNOT write this great. This is. . .nothing short of . . . unreal. I cant even put words here. Its so amazing. God you have talent. Thx for using it here."
Posted by Ladyhawke on "deaf" by edenscancer
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