1 a.m

By edenscancer

its 1 a.m

the skin becomes a noose so tight, you just want to itch it from your bones
when you realize you're becoming everything, you always needed in god
no need for a father, you're such a fucking wreck, and you just want to impress somebody new
because you hate yourself and everyone, thats close, has... become... a part of you
i will only complicate your all too perfect genes with
the impurities in my calls for help, i will drag you down

It's 1 a.m

I'm in your arms

and I'm still alone

run while you can

It's 1 a.m

I'm in your thoughts

But Iput myself here

out of them

I'm so fucked up...

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© 2006 edenscancer
Published on Sunday, April 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, September 23, 2010, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    *speechless*

  • rainbowgoth On Wednesday, November 8, 2006, rainbowgoth (8)By person wrote:

    This is an amazing piece. I can relate to this alot.

  • Vicious Pixie On Monday, April 10, 2006, Vicious Pixie (62)By person wrote:

    i liked this a lot....made me think of fight club for some reason....

  • A former member wrote: razor-glare glance into your psyche.. black shine almost hurts my ears.."the skin becomes a noose so tight, you just want to itch it from your bones".. that line inspired me.

  • A former member wrote: im fucked up too, nice to meet you. this is good:)

  • Mistress Shadow On Sunday, April 9, 2006, Mistress Shadow (252)By person wrote:

    *Joins in*, stupid hour. ~T

  • A former member wrote: This has given me a taste of your mind... addicting words call me back for more.

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