pins and needles

By edenscancer

I walk in through the door
You’re laying on the floor
You’re hypnotized by my sway
Cause’ there are Pins and needles in your veins

I lean down and pick you up
because
You cut when there’s nothing else to do
I guess The boredom just gets to you

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© 2006 edenscancer
Published on Sunday, April 9, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, September 23, 2010, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    Touching. The fact that some in this world do not want to live anymore, either because of their emotions, or in fact, boredom. I've seen it happen. Its sad. Good write tho. It shot close to home for me

  • technicolour-girl On Thursday, November 6, 2008, technicolour-girl (21)By person wrote:



  • AniDayz On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    brutal.

  • A former member wrote: driven and sweetly styled to endpoint. well done.

  • A former member wrote: I still like it :) gina

  • A former member wrote: wow...i wish it was just boredom...so much bottled up emotion, pain, anguish, and confusion goes into cutting, having cut before I claim the right to call it the most reckless thing a person can do to themselves....

  • A former member wrote: any form of cutting or self harm, be it physical or not is overrated, there are so many other ways to express your self...pick up a pen and paper or type your little fingers off, but who ever finds themselve facing a problem like this...

  • A former member wrote: there are soo many ways out, trust me, I'm finding them, slowly mind you, but other options are there ~sinful~

  • A former member wrote: i like it. gina

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