Mezzanine
By edenscancer
Keep dreaming what dreams may come,
drowning slow,
Dreaming of dreams yet to be done,
as we go,
As if a man could ever fathom or see,
What sensations or real dreams could ever be,
god looked down on us today,
The day the world forgot to pray,
And drowned us in his self pity,
The day the world
exploded,
imploded,
degraded, sufficiently seperated from the degenerated, belated, procrastinated
population inhabiting the mezzanine of the world unseen,
was the day you scraping, mis-shapen, groveling, begging, pleading, bleeding,
got down on both knees and started screaming.
Keeping dreaming what dreams may come,
Dreaming of dreams yet to be done,
As if a man could ever fathom or see,
What sensations or real dreams could ever be,
god looked down on us today,
The day the world forgot to pray,
And drowned us in his self pity,
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Comments on "Mezzanine"
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On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112
(70) wrote:
Gentle yet ass kicking! Love love love. Random button, you have not failed me tonight!
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A former member wrote:
his was beautifully written, the way you repeated the beginning at the end... all the more splended. i like your style
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On Sunday, November 5, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
like a bedtime lullaby, mind opening, i like it.... alot! loved it. it had a great sucker punch at the end
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On Wednesday, June 14, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings
(33) wrote:
this sounds really familiar, I think u used part from your old stuff… I remember hearing u sing this… I still like it : )
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A former member wrote:
it's tender and sad, mind-opening.
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On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, Vicious Pixie
(58) wrote:
Gentle lulling start with a punch in the face finish...loved it
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A former member wrote:
Excellent wordplay always leaves a reader with intrigue and desire. Desire to do more for themself.
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On Monday, May 22, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
more than g-r-e-a-t.
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On Monday, May 22, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
that was ...great?