Mezzanine

By edenscancer

Keep dreaming what dreams may come,

drowning slow,

Dreaming of dreams yet to be done,

as we go,

As if a man could ever fathom or see,
What sensations or real dreams could ever be,

god looked down on us today,
The day the world forgot to pray,

And drowned us in his self pity,

The day the world
exploded,
imploded,
degraded, sufficiently seperated from the degenerated, belated, procrastinated population inhabiting the mezzanine of the world unseen,
was the day you scraping, mis-shapen, groveling, begging, pleading, bleeding, got down on both knees and started screaming.
Keeping dreaming what dreams may come,
Dreaming of dreams yet to be done,
As if a man could ever fathom or see,
What sensations or real dreams could ever be,
god looked down on us today,
The day the world forgot to pray,

And drowned us in his self pity,

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© 2006 edenscancer
Published on Monday, May 22, 2006.     Filed under: "Political" and "Poetry"
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  • The_Broken_Fox_2112 On Wednesday, January 11, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112 (113)By person wrote:

    Gentle yet ass kicking! Love love love. Random button, you have not failed me tonight!

  • A former member wrote: his was beautifully written, the way you repeated the beginning at the end... all the more splended. i like your style

  • Lady Grinning Soul On Sunday, November 5, 2006, Lady Grinning Soul (146)By person wrote:

    like a bedtime lullaby, mind opening, i like it.... alot! loved it. it had a great sucker punch at the end

  • BrokenButterflyWings On Wednesday, June 14, 2006, BrokenButterflyWings (33)By person wrote:

    this sounds really familiar, I think u used part from your old stuff� I remember hearing u sing this� I still like it : )

  • A former member wrote: it's tender and sad, mind-opening.

  • Vicious Pixie On Tuesday, May 23, 2006, Vicious Pixie (62)By person wrote:

    Gentle lulling start with a punch in the face finish...loved it

  • A former member wrote: Excellent wordplay always leaves a reader with intrigue and desire. Desire to do more for themself.

  • Mari On Monday, May 22, 2006, Mari (427)By person wrote:

    more than g-r-e-a-t.

  • Mari On Monday, May 22, 2006, Mari (427)By person wrote:

    that was ...great?

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