corpse in my arms

By edenscancer

hold a candle to, all the distance in between
the shattered parts of you
light the night toward the way to say
that the body has forgotten how to breathe
get in touch with the hell inside
just so i can sing it long enough to write
all the horror written on my heart
screaming through my lips
tearing me apart

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© 2006 edenscancer
Published on Sunday, May 7, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Thursday, September 23, 2010, Ladyhawke (394)By person wrote:

    Love the meaning behind the read. It speaks without saying a word. Great title too:)

  • Riven Waker On Tuesday, August 17, 2010, Riven Waker (323)By person wrote:

    the swift rhythm divulges the profound meaning quite well - brilliant piece

  • blue On Saturday, May 27, 2006, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    Holyshit! oooh, that gave me goosebumps! Fantastic writing here. Oh yes indeed. ~b

  • A former member wrote: short but very powerful. It gave me chills. I like this piece alot.

  • Vicious Pixie On Monday, May 8, 2006, Vicious Pixie (62)By person wrote:

    everytime i read one of your works, i'm overcome with a torrent of suffocating emotion. this was no different.

  • A former member wrote: breath-shattering. wonderful.

  • little butterfly On Sunday, May 7, 2006, little butterfly (36)By person wrote:

    Interesting .................

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