land of heroes, dead

By edenscancer

Forgive me father for what I'm about to do
I am so tired of silence returned, while reaching out to you
This deep sleep walking, half dream and death
Never ebbing like winters spread has to come to an end

Forgive me mother for all I've put you through
I can't go on knowing the evil that people like me can do
nightmares will carry me along far after this song
Where silence will peel like paint
under duress of choking pain
and I can be the child I was
Before innocence was gone
And I can be, what I was, again

Forgive me lover for the words I said to you

I never meant to hurt you,
like this
and it's like...

Like demon's beating this body to broken beaten bones, I'm filled with passion burnt cinders of me!
Cursed with the passion to scream, lacking the words to speak,
Dead like canvas craving paint, where the will to create brings you to shakes
and shudders...
as your mind slowly breaks

and the words are shit, that streamed when the poet woke
you wouldn't believe the ignorance that fucked from his throat

Forgive the irony in this land of heroes dead
Where the mouths that hunger, can't be fed
Where my only hero is what this shell used to be

what sadly, used to be me

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© 2006 edenscancer
Published on Saturday, December 23, 2006.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • Ladyhawke On Monday, October 18, 2010, Ladyhawke (392)By person wrote:

    This was no short of amazing! The way it flows and you can just read so fluently. . . its amazing!

  • A former member wrote: Hey! Nice work ^^ Umm... I've got a question, if anyone can answer, are my Poems really protected with the rights here given? I'm afraid to display them... I liked Your work, nice Feeling, may I ask what inspired You?

  • Winter Born On Thursday, December 3, 2009, Winter Born (169)By person wrote:

    Very good write! I loved it and I can see why it was chosen as poem of the day!

  • RubyXero On Thursday, December 3, 2009, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    I very much loved this poem. very emotional work

  • A former member wrote: Wow, this is really well done! I love the beautiful way you expressed guilt at the beginning.

  • Mylissa On Saturday, January 27, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Stunning.

  • A former member wrote: great write. a bit depressing but still a powerful piece. never feel like you have to explain yourself to those who dont understand ~tamara

  • A former member wrote: The contest was about your personal hero. Not having no heros. ][ ][

  • Dei On Sunday, December 24, 2006, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    You never dissapoint me. well done babe

  • insideout On Saturday, December 23, 2006, insideout (47)By person wrote:

    Unmistakably always with you. It's beautiful.

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