A transparent roadkill charming it's way to my bed
By Dancing_Monkey
Campsite panorama, our endless strain,
Favorite ringtones downspin vigorously
Realisation repeat distraction revealing exaggerated prime
- bloom melodrama
Mesmeric this silent spell; A plastic lure
Collectable item not to be traded [Driftwood]
Secretly clawed away in umbral indulgance
I hug myself in closure
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© 2007 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Thursday, May 17, 2007.
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On Friday, May 30, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(288) wrote:
I'm not entirely sure I "get" it but I am entirely sure I like it.
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On Sunday, June 24, 2007, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
bananamanstrikesagain
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On Monday, June 18, 2007, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
articulate.......in direction and feeling...........well done
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On Saturday, June 16, 2007, sIo
(898) wrote:
the part about driftwood and hugging yourself in closure...i love the closure line thats the best. the rest is jumbled but makes for a very nice thing to ATTEMPT to visualize.
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, blue
(1409) wrote:
I.. umm. I dont get it. o.O)) oop. ~b
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Favourite monotony - explosion convulsions and mania - beyond human, far beyond distraction (victimless myopathy) more real than reality - stick in hand, beach combing phantasia to a degree of fallacy...
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On Tuesday, May 22, 2007, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Favourite ringtone is silence, the silent spell of silence itelf - contemplate contemplation by the river and float on...some things are too important to have a price...this is fantastic
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A former member wrote:
*feeds the monkey a banana* excellent!~Meg
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, verablue
(106) wrote:
the title sucked me in right away. brilliant word choice.
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, carlosjackal
(2785) wrote:
Bloody magnificent!! If I had room on my account this would be an instant fave. This rocks like a raging bitch on heat with clawhammer. Fuckin' nice! -Carl
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Alanarchy
(1169) wrote:
Utterly crushing.
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
this work demands comments.. so here is my one comment. life can be a series of stepping stones, look forward and make sure one of them is not a turtle, because it doesnt matter if you fall, just dont hurt the turtle *wind kick*
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Anth
(1126) wrote:
i can only describe this poem as an implosion, a singularity of words condensed so tightly from a million thoughts into something so neat, its after youve read this that it explodes.
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Anth
(1126) wrote:
an embrace so close that it is a star folding into itself. theres almost anger in this, in its quiet intensity, and yet a feeling of utter randomness, its all so much juxtaposition that i feel i either cannot work this poem out, or know it so intimately,
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On Thursday, May 17, 2007, Anth
(1126) wrote:
it was like i was sitting on a train at night at the bck watching a group of people at the other end, thoughts without words, this poem captures everything and nothing in that most sublime way