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days that just don't move
By swing_the_hammer
saltwater, sad daughter words hurt, silence worse
i'm bored, ignored oh, lord- gone overboard
drink more, think less grab a notebook and confess
paper, pen closest friend- the heart you lend is hard to mend...
i digress, i did my best
with the cards that i was dealt
but i can't speak for all the rest,
the aces in Orion's belt
sweetwater, sadhoney go to work, make money
feel like shit, but i forget- i'm on empty where they left me
streetside, so wide the gap between the loved and lied to
in the end, we love again- but the heart we mend is hard to lend...
i'm gonna miss you if i kiss you
you make me feel i'm not alone
i don't think i can resist you
i might want you for my own
sadwater, sweet daughter in deep, need sleep
heartsleeve, all hallow's eve- i don't think i'll want to leave
good night, sad girl- "I'd give anything in the world
to sleep tight," i sighed, "and have my sweet dreams at your side..."
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, AniDayz
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wrote:
a poetic flow with such an undercurrent of meaning...im always stoked to see one of your works posted...this speaks.
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Loved the flow, and the way the rhymes had me thinking of PJ Harvey's lyrics - Top stuff!
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A former member wrote:
I just don't know. I feel close to this, close in a way that you need not even nod nor speak to signify that you understand. Very unique, ~FAV~
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On Tuesday, October 17, 2006, Lilith
(18) wrote:
wonderful. very good, love the rhymes. ~sara linn~
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A former member wrote:
Wow, Its a different type of poetry that I am used to, but dont get me wrong, I liked the flow. ][Nstant ][Nsanity
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