The Siren's Lament
By RhymeBound
"haul thy anchor, set thy sail
and journey by the sea.
follow my longing, loving wail
to hold and be with me.
seek me by the waters deep
where waves kiss harsh the moon.
upon a reef here high and steep
i hum my lonesome tune.
no day goes by where i don't long
for thy so soothing touch.
my voice it trembles in my song
i miss you oh so much.
no night goes by without a tear
joining the sea below.
i need, i want, must have you near
and never let you go."
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when from afar i saw thy ship,
my hopes rose like the tide.
with swelling heart and quaking lip
i've wished you to my side.
i've begged the winds thy sails to fill,
the waves to push thy stern.
hasten thy ship onwards until
i'd have for what i yearn.
but my desire made me blind,
took all my cares away.
so drunk with love as out of mind
the price i've had to pay.
words alone can't speak my grief
oh how my heart was maimed,
when thy ship crashed into the reef
and by the sea was claimed.
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i've sought you by the waters deep
below the moonbeam cast
where you've succumbed to final sleep,
my first love and my last.
thy body from the depths i've raised
and on my isle interred,
then finally the sea I faced
and made my woe be heard.
my voice swelled to a dire dirge,
cacophony of pain.
the waves they roared up with a surge
and hard down beat the rain.
unending tears spring from my eyes,
give birth to restless waves.
The wind it echoes all my cries,
the storm it madly raves.
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yet too i sing of love that's lost,
of my affection true,
and what my eagerness us cost
and my lament and rue.
the winds they mourning spread my word
of longing and remorse.
sometimes by sailors it is heard
who then for here set course.
for they are blind as i once was;
of love they are a thrall.
my warnings they ignore because
love fools makes of us all.
hundreds have here sunk their ships
and each of them i mourn.
an endless song bring forth my lips
here on my isle forlorn...
~ RhymeBound
Comments on "The Siren's Lament"
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On Monday, November 13, 2006, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
I love this...great read.
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On Friday, November 10, 2006, torn_beauty
(77) wrote:
well you are extremely talented. This was so lovely.
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On Monday, November 6, 2006, wicked flesh
(22) wrote:
Pretty and graceful. Extremely heartfelt.
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A former member wrote:
Such an awesome piece. I enjoyed it from beginning to end. I look forward to reading more from you
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A former member wrote:
wow
its just
wow
thats all i can say
it definatly makes me think of things that have happened
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A former member wrote:
You are such an excellent poet. You should get a DP membership ][Nstant ][Nsanity
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A former member wrote:
Old fashioned ballad feel, very much enjoyed. I smell Talent.
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On Saturday, September 30, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
This left me in awe and i stand all amazed. Your words swept me from line to line and i almost wish it didnt have to end. But the ending itself fit perfectly. You are a great talent.
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On Thursday, September 28, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
no doubt a classic piece of True poetry.... i've read this many, many times now....surely, you are aware of how remarkable every facet of this is.....you must be the only survivor of D. J. Locker.
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, Mord
(35) wrote:
You've sank straight to the depths of the truth. lovely
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
~b
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A former member wrote:
you should really post more... this is just wonderful.... *faves* *~`burned`~*
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A former member wrote:
this is... gorgeous. I am a rhymer as well, though not all of the time, and it makes me happy to see another, especially one who writes so beautifully, many people do not appreciate rhyming poetry as they should. *~`burned`~*
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
I can't stop coming back to this. You've achieved the near impossible with me. Many thanks. ~b
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On Sunday, September 24, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
Fucking brilliant! ~b
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A former member wrote:
Nice, Reminds me alot of Walt Whitmen, There arn't many poets that write like this anymore. Very Good.
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On Monday, September 11, 2006, ShardsofSilence
(219) wrote:
goodness, a dizzy. I'm deeply intrigued; all the images crashing in my mind. You've left me speechless
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On Sunday, September 10, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
Ya know what? I'm so taken with this piece that I need to delete a bookmark (all full =/) and add it to me collection of favs. Shakespeare's sonnets are the only other rhymes I enjoy (outside of musical lyrics) so yeah, you've accomplished something beyon
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On Sunday, September 10, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
..beyond great here for me. Highest praise to you! ~b
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On Sunday, September 10, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
A beautiful piece of work, brings a whole depth of feeling, that lonely stuck to the mast feel, that beautiful terror...well done
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On Sunday, September 10, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
ageless in its reach........a tale of loss.......and the trials.......that love imprints on one..........truly beautiful words....................well done...........urban
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A former member wrote:
Spoken with a certain grace as well as overwhelming sorrow. I admit, I have read this several times over the past few days and it has touched me deeply. Beautifully rendered. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
this was refreshing to read and fall into ... **smiles**..~RAIN~
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On Thursday, September 7, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
Oh my! Well. haha, here it comes.. I really do not like rhyming poetry, at all, but this!! ..this is absolutely suberb in it's flow. All too often the rhymes people use become tedious, silly..
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On Thursday, September 7, 2006, blue
(1409) wrote:
But you have most certainly avoided such trappings. My highest compliments to you, on this remarkably wonderful rhyme! =) *you get a cookie* ~b
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On Wednesday, September 6, 2006, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
*three cheers* for marvellous metre and syllabic cadence, all while delivering this wonderful and enrapturing story. Manywelcomes to dp; excellent write.
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On Wednesday, September 6, 2006, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
ps: i love your little worddance on your homepage.
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A former member wrote:
I guess I have a soft spot for romantic poetry. I can not really express those type of emotions, so you kind of did it for me.
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A former member wrote:
The rhyme and rhythm flowed were nicely. Some lines were a little awkward, but other than that you did an excellent job. :D
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, LordBrosnian
(44) wrote:
finally another worshipper of the ancient...the way poetry was meant to be. Welcome brother. You have won my praise immediately. Hell of an ice breaker. YOUR ON MY FAVORITES! (that doesn't happen much...I'm adamantly bullheaded)
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On Wednesday, August 30, 2006, LordBrosnian
(44) wrote:
Uncanny to an eye untrained of equal'd mastery, These words now brand their sickness pon my soul, beg pardon of my accolade to your relentless art, Rather accept the marvel of my soul...
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A former member wrote:
"my warnings they ignore because/love fools makes of us all." The rhyme scheme to this is simply exquisite, your choice of language bridging the gap between the concept and the ending idea. Beautifully done. I love it. ~*Beth*~
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On Tuesday, August 29, 2006, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Wow. This was very nice. Flowed like a river. Great choice of words. Alot of top notch lines, too many to quote. Wonderful images and sentiments. I loved this one. Write the hell on.
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A former member wrote:
I like this poem. You're a very good writer. It was sad and beautiful.