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Gold wrapped Memory scorn
By Dancing_Monkey
Night time was the dream of details, claiming mind over matter
Befriended, man hunts his pray
And just knowing that you had to disagree, made it all seem brighter
Every breath lies; A simularity
Forcing me to obtain, distressful faces of personal revelations
Deluded subterfuge
Inclined seduction
Cold brush of aspiration weave,
Curtain fall, kiss - Domino conjunction
And on the forth day she told him, this is not what I had in mind
Fiddle of amber; Blind sight companion
Adjust the speech of your master
A tricksters tribute
A knight oh so valliant
Dog of hospice, hospital Erato.
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© 2006 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Wednesday, August 23, 2006.
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On Sunday, June 17, 2007, sIo
(898)
wrote:
the first line, and 'dog of hospice' you always have such prominent thoughts in your poetry. honestly i may not understand the entire thing but i take from it something i never would have being on my own...
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On Sunday, June 17, 2007, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
=) Surreal dream fuck memory mash-up. Fantastic. -Carl
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A former member wrote:
Mesmerizing... loved the "on the fourth day".. Intriguing use of vocabulary... Now i'm going to reread it and continue futile efforts to comprehend
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On Sunday, June 3, 2007, elisa
(1595) wrote:
a mime in motion.... '...Dog of hospice, hospital Erato. .' ....ergo... Poet of hospice, hospital Muse..... your words always penetrate.
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2007, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
I dont get the ending. But I love the "Fiddle of amber" stanza. You know you've got it. --Jes
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A former member wrote:
I've visited your page about 3 times and, everytime I did, I read this poem and felt different things as I was reading it. And, after reading it for the fourth time, I still can't put those feelings into words. I really like this one...
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On Tuesday, January 30, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
elegent with a twist of sadistic iorny, loved it, WRITE MORE!
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On Saturday, January 13, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
you have a unique use of vocabulary that catches the eye and intrigues..and the images and messages it conveys are just as wonderful..you have depth my friend ~kristy
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On Saturday, January 13, 2007, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
Now this is a real comment.. *Runs off screaming*
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On Friday, October 20, 2006, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
unique and penetrating, the language you use makes it whimsically vibrant, though also concrete. plus I love the word subterfuge and major points for incorporating such an awesome word!
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On Sunday, October 8, 2006, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
the language and flow of this is wonderful, elegant and sweeping as it tumbles through and around the mind, provoking thought and reflection... *cheers*
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On Tuesday, September 26, 2006, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
abstract......metaphors.....drawing one in......................well done................urban
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On Monday, September 18, 2006, A_Puppet_Show
(163) wrote:
Comment on Monkeys works you bastards! Just cous I spam my thoughts here dosnt mean you should not comment!
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On Saturday, August 26, 2006, A_Puppet_Show
(163) wrote:
"mind over matter" ~ "Blind sight companion" ... "man hunts his... ""... knowing you had to disagree" ~ "A tricksters tribute" "A "knight oh so valliant
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On Saturday, August 26, 2006, A_Puppet_Show
(163) wrote:
Full circle and shit eh? Its a connection if nothing els. And what I find interesting here is your trickster knight game, cous I know you circle alot around it.
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On Saturday, August 26, 2006, A_Puppet_Show
(163) wrote:
Mostly taking one stand but its realy your monkey playing your ego and your ego bashing your monkey in a lovely eternal dance.
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On Saturday, August 26, 2006, A_Puppet_Show
(163) wrote:
Well there is that and then there is some fine images that are more personal and that I will like when you explain em.
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On Saturday, August 26, 2006, A_Puppet_Show
(163) wrote:
ohh btw I know the knight and trickster may be outsiders but I dont give a shit, they are in you both as archetypes. Infact more then any other I know. Tiger
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On Thursday, August 24, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I enjoyed the profound conjunctions, the characteristic two by two waterfall...I especially loved he pause and timbre of the "on the fourth day"
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On Thursday, August 24, 2006, Solace
(1065) wrote:
The dogs of hospice, a little twist for me and a joke, and yet a brilliant conclusion as well...the tribute of a trickster gave man fire and life...
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On Thursday, August 24, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
"Curtain fall, kiss- Domino conjunction" Outstanding line there! The piece as a whole was really great. It's those kind of thoughts that remind us we are everchanging. Hind sight is 20/20, afterall. Thanks for the point to this kind sir. ;) Julia~
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On Thursday, August 24, 2006, elisa
(1595) wrote:
a muse mangled poet ...perhaps... caught in a moment of clarity..... torn thoughts pieced into words.... a tug-of-war in mind.........just.. wow... this drilled straight through my consciousness.
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On Wednesday, August 23, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
This was incredible I loved the words, they rocked you against a shore. ~Gothic
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A former member wrote:
This is a good poem. Good write.
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