Joked Heel

By Dancing_Monkey

Caterpillar seek electric refuge
Feel; Pedestal meditation, steel forsaken, mistaken
Drawn by beam and glance of heel
Joking as we drift by vertical
Crystal tear on ravens back
Guided by the weaver
I kiss the wyld and fistfuck the wyrm of torment

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© 2006 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Sunday, May 14, 2006.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Your an alternative artifact frozen in ti.me, .. parallel kinesis shapeshifting the alphabet to suit your dimension, such an original cat that i wish would surface more often...brilliant monkey.

  • Mylissa On Sunday, August 12, 2007, Mylissa (852)By person wrote:

    The ending is a stunning symphony, it still is thread within my ear. You leave me thirsty for more.

  • carlosjackal On Sunday, June 24, 2007, carlosjackal (2577)By person wrote:

    "Crystal tear on ravens back" What a line and what a surreal mind-fuck this is. Brilliant. -Carl

  • hate_doll On Friday, October 20, 2006, hate_doll (266)By person wrote:

    wonderuflly odd (but totally working) rhythm.

  • Clementine On Tuesday, July 4, 2006, Clementine (123)By person wrote:

    i love to fistfuck wyrms and worms and worries....you speak to me like an old sermun...if you ever come to NYC lets fuck...jamacan style

  • hate_doll On Friday, October 20, 2006, hate_doll (266)By person wrote:

    this a hot comment.

  • knightmirror On Saturday, May 20, 2006, knightmirror (432)By person wrote:

    you always know how to say so much with not saying really that much...this is an amazing write brother full of creativity and wordplay....always a pleasure to read your works....-chris

  • Aurora_Light On Wednesday, May 17, 2006, Aurora_Light (482)By person wrote:

    wow i love the line "Crystal tear on ravens back" it hit me and held a meaning to me, maybe not the meaning you intended but meaning all the same. it's good to see you are still writeing

  • Guillotine On Monday, May 15, 2006, Guillotine (176)By person wrote:

    twas brillig and the slimy toves to gyre and gimble in the wabe.

  • A former member wrote: twas brillig.ness.. ..such the jabberwock; this meanderingly maddens the mind and softstrokes the subconcious soul into a full throbbing submission; THOSE INGENIOUS IMAGES>>> [incredible] ness

  • Guillotine On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Guillotine (176)By person wrote:

    well, solace confused me so i'll lay it straight. I. Like. This. ~Guill

  • Solace On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Solace (1081)By person wrote:

    What to say? Where to disseminate, extrapolate, perhaps i'll just procrastinate? Pedestrian meditation i thought at first, this caterpillar smiles

  • Solace On Sunday, May 14, 2006, Solace (1081)By person wrote:

    You walk with a tinge of traditionalism, and a speckle of new wisdom - fresh eyes on old things - a marriage i adorn with my praise...

  • A former member wrote: this danced off my tongue in a strangely catchy beat, the preciseness of your words and the incredible individuality of your perception, is an amazing thing to find.

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