Some Thoughts That Don't Connect....

By A Broken Soul

Shivers quivers
Twitches dishes
Noises poises
Coils foils

Every which way
Everywhere I see your face
Morning boring
Sickness wish list
Classic spastic
Retard Leonard
Miss fist kiss this
Dim grim
Fuck luck
Meow cow
Snore roar
Car far

Every mingled detail
Bring me to such hell
Look on the bright side
Maybe it’s a sign

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© 2005 Perletti
Published on Monday, December 26, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • worm On Thursday, September 14, 2017, worm (1149)By person wrote:

    come write more...

  • A former member wrote: damn good job

  • A former member wrote: "Miss fist kiss this" Every mingled dada'sound detail here i/swell done, & still feels like a poem. Good luck.

  • A former member wrote: *smiles* Yes...I definately know this feeling...been here a lot lately. You have portrayed it brilliantly. Love it! *Evangel*

  • A Broken Soul On Monday, December 26, 2005, A Broken Soul (80)By person wrote:

    Veingo has got the idea right... it's deffinetly a mix of that & trying to distract myself from thoughts of them but failing miserably. Peace~

  • veingo On Monday, December 26, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    I knew it! *does victory dance*

  • weyvern On Monday, December 26, 2005, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    wow i so feel this poem! exellent write

  • veingo On Monday, December 26, 2005, veingo (526)By person wrote:

    I get it...It,s how when you miss someone, anything, and everything, (no matter how obsure) seems to remind you of them. Am I right? Because I've been there. ^V^

  • Crimson Shade On Monday, December 26, 2005, Crimson Shade (92)By person wrote:

    ?? - confused... im missing the point of this poem... if anyone understands this drop us a line and let us know... other wise i like the last stanza... every poem should have "look on the bright side" in it some where.

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