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Some Thoughts That Don't Connect....
By A Broken Soul
Shivers quivers
Twitches dishes
Noises poises
Coils foils
Every which way
Everywhere I see your face
Morning boring
Sickness wish list
Classic spastic
Retard Leonard
Miss fist kiss this
Dim grim
Fuck luck
Meow cow
Snore roar
Car far
Every mingled detail
Bring me to such hell
Look on the bright side
Maybe it’s a sign
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© 2005 Perletti
Published on Monday, December 26, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Some Thoughts That Don't Connect...."
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On Thursday, September 14, 2017, worm
(1194)
wrote:
come write more...
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A former member wrote:
damn good job
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A former member wrote:
"Miss fist kiss this" Every mingled dada'sound detail here i/swell done, & still feels like a poem. Good luck.
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A former member wrote:
*smiles* Yes...I definately know this feeling...been here a lot lately. You have portrayed it brilliantly. Love it! *Evangel*
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, A Broken Soul
(81) wrote:
Veingo has got the idea right... it's deffinetly a mix of that & trying to distract myself from thoughts of them but failing miserably. Peace~
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, veingo
(533) wrote:
I knew it! *does victory dance*
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, weyvern
(80) wrote:
wow i so feel this poem! exellent write
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, veingo
(533) wrote:
I get it...It,s how when you miss someone, anything, and everything, (no matter how obsure) seems to remind you of them. Am I right? Because I've been there. ^V^
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On Monday, December 26, 2005, Crimson Shade
(92) wrote:
?? - confused... im missing the point of this poem... if anyone understands this drop us a line and let us know... other wise i like the last stanza... every poem should have "look on the bright side" in it some where.
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