Hell____without you
By veingo
New York, New York.
San Francisco bay.
I've had to run, from the Phoenix sun,
and escape from LA.
And I had my fill,
just passing through.
You know it isn't very pretty,
what a city with no pity can do.
Come back my friend, my love, my healer.
Now I smoke & drink & sleep all alone.
When you left, you said "I,ll see you later".
But I can't wait, I've got to bring you home.
Hell just ain't no fun, without you!
I've torn Paris down.
Turned Glasgow all around.
Through east & west Berlin.
Checked out the Bangkok Inn.
Watched London Bridge fall down.
And I had my fill,
just passing through.
And no, it isn't very pretty,
what a city with no pity can do.
Bring back my heart, my soal, my reason.
Now I'm hurt and hollow, desperate and cold.
When you left I knew we'd meet again but,
I never thought that it would take this long.
And Hell just ain't no fun, without you!
I keep moveing along.
I'm searching your old haunts.
At night I just can't sleep.
I lay there trying to think.
Where might you have gone?
And I'm so damned tired,
of being cut up and bruised.
You know it isn't very pretty,
what a city with no pity can do.
Come back my friend, my love, my healer.
I've been chaseing you for far to long.
Every time I think I might have found you.
I've come to find out that, you've been long gone.
But hell just ain't no fun, without you!
Comments on "Hell____without you"
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On Sunday, October 25, 2015, rwb35
(64) wrote:
Typos aside, this is very poignant and speaks of terrible loss, very good read
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A former member wrote:
Bravo! This a truly brilliant work.
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On Monday, November 25, 2013, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
Wow... I'm so blown away, stunned really. This was one hell of a write. I'm actually rambling instead of commenting properly. I'm in love with this poem. Bows-
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On Wednesday, January 2, 2008, Mari
(419) wrote:
I liked this, it sounded like something I would read in a book.
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On Sunday, January 14, 2007, Sin
(1135) wrote:
this reminded me of "Home" by Michael Buble...and it sang in my head beautifully ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
the use of repetition here is very good, you used it just enough, in all the right places, not always easy to do... *~`burned`~*
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On Wednesday, February 8, 2006, weyvern
(80) wrote:
wow this is perfect! I can feel the agony and i think everyone needs that healer at some point wonderfully written!
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On Monday, February 6, 2006, Nail Bunny
(161) wrote:
this is a fabulos piece. terrific concept and .... uh... stuff!
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On Thursday, January 26, 2006, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
You are freakin amazing!! This kicks ass!
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A former member wrote:
yeah, need someone to raise a little hell with....nice rhyme, stanzas and refrain (sounds like marriage again...can ya tell I'm recently divorced?)
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A former member wrote:
i love this oen it makes me think about someone that i loved very much and now it feels like my hell isnt so much fun anymore its empty and ull with out him good job this rocks
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On Sunday, October 16, 2005, Frater Synth
(66) wrote:
well i didn't really like this peice that much but whos 2 say my opinion really matters here
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, veingo
(526) wrote:
Honesty, ROCKS! So thanks anyway. ^V^
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On Friday, October 14, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
this felt so natural, for a moment i forgot i was sitting alone reading the words in my mind and i lost myself in a spoken moment of a conversation between two people truly in love...........as i come back to reality.