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Autumn Commeth
By mysticventures
Hallowed is . . . the season come
Ere the warmth . . . of summer gone
All earths colors . . . blend as one
Velvet leaves . . . thru rivers run
Enter earth . . . from whence they come
Nevermore . . . to know the sun
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Copyright 2005 mysticventures
Published on Tuesday, September 27, 2005.
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On Friday, March 9, 2012, darkness falls
(73)
wrote:
Perfection...
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A former member wrote:
A very well versed description of •heaven• on earth.
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On Tuesday, April 28, 2009, CjPsychotic
(30) wrote:
I'm hardly ever stunned for critisism..or puns :)...but this was so simply perfect for me. Very nice.
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On Tuesday, April 14, 2009, sixsixnine
(476) wrote:
Come back and sing us another. I miss you. ~matt
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A former member wrote:
I know you don't post here anymore friend but this deserves a comment. I never should have missed this when it was posted.
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On Sunday, June 18, 2006, Tonights Decision
(132) wrote:
this is great! solem is the word.
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A former member wrote:
You deserved the award, THIS IS MASTERPIECE !!!
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On Tuesday, November 15, 2005, happilydepressed
(400) wrote:
I bow before your work
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
beautiful and solem.......just as autumn..............well done and congratulations..........well earned...............urban
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On Saturday, November 5, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul
(143) wrote:
congratulation on your victory ~gothicangel~
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A former member wrote:
Congrats on your victory!
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On Saturday, October 22, 2005, Aethelwyne
(51) wrote:
Whoa thats Beauty. I dont just see it, i feel it, smell it, hell i could probably feel it if i tried.
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On Wednesday, October 19, 2005, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
a simple and an 'ethereal' better outlook than a 'death' season =) congratulations!
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On Wednesday, October 19, 2005, Gideon Lost
(137) wrote:
I like the way this was put together. The flow is balanced, almost like riding a see saw. Also, I like the imagery. "Enter earth . . . from whence tehy come" - this is a great line. Worthy of winning. -Gideon
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On Monday, October 17, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
yuppers.. I'm really diggin' this. Damn fine writing. ~b
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On Sunday, October 16, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Well shit! It's no wonder you won. This was just fantastic. Superb. Outstanding. Exemplary. ..need I continue? ~b
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
you are too sweet glass :)
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
it's just splendiferous!!!!!.....i love it all....great write.."Nevermore....to know the sun".....beautiful
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On Thursday, October 6, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
This is perfect! ~T~
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On Monday, October 3, 2005, GothicBlack
(186) wrote:
this has such a calming effect, much like a prayer said at night to a scared little child. I love this poem. So short yet perfectly sweat. ~gothic~
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A former member wrote:
this is just lovely
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful, I could recite this in my sleep.
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
perfect in rhythm and substance. VERY nicely done. -Glass
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On Tuesday, October 11, 2005, glasshouse
(530) wrote:
I keep coming back to this because I am so thoroughly impressed. This was delicate and gentle and pure and as close to perfect as poetry is allowed to be and still be poetry. great job, hun. -Glass
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On Wednesday, September 28, 2005, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
*hugs* good to have you here again and this was beautifully dark in its flowing of life's cirlce...outstanding
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On Tuesday, September 27, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
each of your writes has such flowing grace its like watching silk dance in the wind...again im so glad youre back ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
you truely have a style that i've never seen pulled-off so well. this was written so beautifully. ....-samone
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A former member wrote:
Brilliant. I missed this...I almost forgot..how spectacularly your writes warm my spine and how I forget to have to wet my lips to appease my dry throat..almost.
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A former member wrote:
Winding and sweeping..I could almost wrap these words around my finger. You are quite the poet sir, and this..
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A former member wrote:
..this shone.
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