Wake me tip-toed
By BeautifulCalamity
We..
We cut apart guns with our sweetness. taste me, taste us.
Tear hot pistols to pieces, dripping acid saliva.
Mute the ocean breathless, must we?
Single glance solitude..
and I was never alone.
I..
Loved you in your own hands,
adored the surrounding cities.
You, you are those cities.. .
To watch your eyes fall into mine,
fall into me beautiful thing.
Liquid gashes, dances..
Strawberry of my wrist.
Pretty kisses for your bruised fist..
Yes- I felt my bones cracking.
Caught you shirtless did the camera?
Nudist running creations through my own,
some collection of dreams
giving us pictures of the places we'll see..
--with hope.
Brick heavy legs stop me, stop the girl..
I don't want to be gone
[anywhere but gone]
God keeps me on top of you,
Body stretched and turned at your curves..
You keep me there.
I still am-
[the beautiful part of you]
Time is moving funerals,
silent births with silent babies..
Shotgun, it is somewhere inside of me.
It resides hollow since you came..
It has grown, loved and kissed
since you existed|resisted
To be in you,
my connection to feeling. to heart..
trusted deceit, the number three
three kisses. three sessions. three se.pera.ted minds
tongues
bodies
hearts
-to the heartbeat .still. beat. you want life?
Play the organs along my spine,
so that the hands may vibrate inside.
And all music is music mine.
Radio, I want to be your sound..
-I want to be the beautiful part of you.
Attention to this line,
Draw your faces here..
masks here
love here
blank yourself of me,
stunned to be seperated.
Ancient doubt,
I want to be everything for you.
Kiss me, and send me to sleep..
the dreams must be waiting..
Waiting to wake me tear-stained are those dreams..
And all dreams are dreams mine.
Tell me darling,
when can I expect you?
I am ready.
I am waiting.
Minutes pass like days taking breaths..
Breathing, am I?
Hours will not exist below your sheets.
Please slow time,
Please break your golden clock.
Time will not be our picket fence..
Please, am I breathing?
Wake me in the morning,
but only if I am next to you..
Wake me in the morning,
touch my eyelids and lick my lips.
I want to see your face,
It is you.
It is your body..
your hands,
your voice
. . .
[good morning beautiful]
and all you are,
all you are is all mine.
[i'm in love with you]
Comments on "Wake me tip-toed"
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On Monday, September 26, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
If I could only bring the words to speak to tell you what a masterpiece this is. You have a talent so deep an precious. I loveee you! I'm floored.
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A former member wrote:
Strange how much interior we see in a land devoid of exteriors. The voicelessness, not knowing the trappings of a smile or a sigh, and yet common ground.
Such sparks in the darkness, reminding us that we aren't as alien as we sometimes feel...
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On Wednesday, August 24, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
ohmygoddess---*you*---amazing. completely and entirely---this is wonderous...as always. leaving me struggling to regain my breath.you are a gift my sweet.
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A former member wrote:
- you make me want to weep. Thank you..
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A former member wrote:
over and thinking god, you have to be one of the most talented people on this site. Your words speak to me.. i can feel so much by just reading a few lines. This has to be one of the best poems you have ever wrote.."I still am- [the beautiful part of you]
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A former member wrote:
"Wake me in the morning, but only if I am next to you/ God keeps me on top of you, Body stretched and turned at your curves.. You keep me there." I don't know what to say. This has blown me away..it really, really has.. I just keep reading it over and ove
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On Friday, August 12, 2005, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
"Please, am I breathing?" Wow. Your so talented it hurts. Why do you thrive on making the rest of us look bad. Get a book published and just put a link here so you don't have to shame us any longer. ;)
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On Thursday, August 11, 2005, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
'Mute the ocean breathless, must we?' aaah.. so many wonderful lines..
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On Thursday, August 11, 2005, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
Do you know what? I actually can't comment on this. I can't do it. There's nothing I can say. But this is so stuck inside my head and heart I need you at least to know that I read it..
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A former member wrote:
This is absolutely lovely.
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
?!? my god girl, whosoever finds their way to your heart is a lucky person indeed.. you strike so perfectly the chords that play at my soul! And Six is absolutely on the mark!! ~b
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
You're too young to write this magnificantly. ;)
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
I'll come back when my head clears.. undeniable your talent is LeahAnn. ~b