.masturbation.
By doll on the rag
to all you self-serving, comment-whoring fuckers.
stop it.
stop putting yourself
in my place
(we can't share it)
stop taking my memories
and labeling them yours
(your writing is illegible)
stop claiming you understand
these misarranged arrangements
(you have no empathy)
stop putting your name
on my reluctant lips
(i've never spoken to you)
stop saying you've been
everywhere my footsteps lie
(no one followed me here)
stop multiplying
stop making chains of one another
beating paths to each and every
fuck-you suicide note
and anti-social tendency
posted in rapid-fire succession
stop getting each other off
all over the place
with your bitter-torment screennames
and your blood-dripping poem titles
(oh, but it tastes so good
and everyone will notice your fangs)
go ahead
and wrap yourselves
in your precious black velvet
and crimson satin
and make small-talk with the
demons in the night,
telling your scar-noted stories
over and over again
to an audience who will fawn over you
like you want.
a really satisfying ego-fuck.
go ahead.
i don't give a shit.
but stop masturbating here
and stay away from my poems.
Comments on ".masturbation."
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A former member wrote:
Hot fucking damn, this is timeless.
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On Saturday, April 26, 2008, colorapathy
(50) wrote:
well written.. biting and harsh. hurrah for enjoyable sarcasm and insults.
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On Thursday, June 29, 2006, Thorn
(282) wrote:
I'm gonna leave this lame statement as a comment, just to spite you. Hahahaha... But seriously, I still get a kick out of this write.
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On Tuesday, January 10, 2006, ONEANDLONELY
(114) wrote:
iF yOU wANT pEOPLE tO sTOP rEADING yOUR pOEMS, tHEN sTOP nAMING tHEM... "masturbation"
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On Wednesday, January 11, 2006, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
you're really dumb.
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On Wednesday, November 30, 2005, Clementine
(121) wrote:
comment removed by DP admins
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On Saturday, October 29, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
You make a note worthy point and you portray it in a simple yet concise form. Fricken awesome piece! (to join the masses) ~T~
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On Tuesday, August 9, 2005, Thorn
(282) wrote:
*smiles, but says nothing*
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On Friday, August 5, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(357) wrote:
LOL fuckin' A that cracks me up. Of course... by commenting I'm becoming part of all you despise... my name on your unforgiving lips (does it taste bitter?)
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On Tuesday, July 26, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
This was fucking awesome. Great write. -kitty
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On Thursday, July 21, 2005, Saint_Reaper
(200) wrote:
wow, this is a new side of the doll.... angry yet i like it...
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A former member wrote:
(I can not believe no one has done this yet) WOW! I could totaly feel this! its like you took the words right out of my head! I can relate to this totaly and completly!( sorry but if I hadn't done it some body else would have)
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas
(715) wrote:
what do you mean no one has done this yet? poems like this come up all the time. i think it's funny (and i am and have been guilty too, mind)
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On Thursday, July 21, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
i think he means no one left a comment of the very nature i was ranting about. i'm well aware this is not an original topic, but thanks for your input.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas
(715) wrote:
that we all come to a place called 'darkpoetry' and wonder that there are needy 'gothy' teen-angst types around looking for validation...
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas
(715) wrote:
it's like a sore in the mouth. yea, i'm usually dissapointed with the comments i get as they are just trying to get my attention... but i still get good feedback from my favorites here... and that's good enough for me.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Jonas
(715) wrote:
and that's my two cents.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
someone was bound to do it... at least you weren't being sincere.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Hah. I love you.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
you bet you do.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
She's mine.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
I don't think so little man.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
aww... how sweet. nothing gives me the warm fuzzies like poets bickering over my affections.
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On Wednesday, July 20, 2005, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Wow. You have a lot of guts. *lifts glass* Cheers.
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A former member wrote:
hmm caught me by surprise
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
you're probably one of the people who clicked on it because of the title, and thinking maybe you'd get to read a dirty lust-poem
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
boo-yaa!! mock emotions are pathetic
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A former member wrote:
wow.. that was rough. i feel like you just desicrated me. for some reason. this was fucking harsh. nicely done.
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
i'm the nicest bitch you'll ever meet. service with a smile, and all that jazz. thanks for reading. *mwah*
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
I don't believe anyone has said it better.
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
oh, they have. this is just my little venting piece.
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
*breathesmiles*
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, doll on the rag
(200) wrote:
you spoil me, amyamy.
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On Tuesday, July 19, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(178) wrote:
As do you, me, love.