VOICES No.5
By TheBardOfBlasphemy
Voice I: The essence of this tendency to abstain is born from an overwhelming
desire to escape.
Voice II: And yet, there can be no escape.
Voice I: Exactly. Furthermore, I am running out of places to run and
hide to, I have fallen so far that the floor is now my ceiling.
Voice II: And yet, there never was a floor.
Voice I: Precisely so. Which means that my ever-opening abyss, my bottomless
pit, the dank hole I must forever plunge down, this is my highest achievement.
I cannot expect to rise above an abject mediocrity.
Voice II: Even this, I propose, is beyond you.
Voice I: Yes, most likely. But where does this leave me?
Voice II: It leaves you nowhere. As you have said, you are forever descending
further – into new realms of futile discovery. And the darkness never
leaves, nowhere never leaves you alone.
Voice I: That’s right. Or is it wrong? I’m always alone, only - nowhere
never leaves me. Nowhere never leaves me alone.
Voice II: Do you feel lonely now?
Voice I: Yes.
Voice II: But why?
Voice I: Because I am talking to myself. Or to nobody. And nobody never
leaves me alone either.
Comments on "VOICES No.5"
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A former member wrote:
echo purr: this felt avant-garde and modern....a little black humour sprinkled in and makes for some very head.tilting and interesting poetry......goes against my normal 'romanticism', but hey,......
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On Monday, January 23, 2006, AHHH
(184) wrote:
ha wow.
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A former member wrote:
I am going to hunt you down, kill you and put you on a plaque. Okay....so....no....that it kinda creepy. But I'll think about it anyway.-Memory
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On Thursday, August 25, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
absolutely incredible...this is a constructed piece of brilliance that extends and expands into depths so deep they are shadowless...im absolutely in awe.
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A former member wrote:
The explanations contained herein resonate with half-truths to the depth and propensity of this... like a language Im starting to get the hang of... but am uncertain of dialectical changes in the territories.
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
Great stuff on several levels. I like the dry darkhumour touch to this; it reminds me of Dada (the art movement, not a silly nickname for my father...). Excellently done.
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, LovelyAssassinx
(151) wrote:
Wow. This was excellent. Great write. ~Sara
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On Tuesday, July 5, 2005, Buckwise McDickermeat
(6) wrote:
very brilliant, surrealism that makes sense within the given context. quite excellent work!
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A former member wrote:
this is great,kinda reminds me of Burroughs