To Ryan D. [Rewritten for Dave]

By l mo

I choke on big fat dicks

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Copyright 2005 night_sky
Published on Friday, August 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Comedy" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: fantastic improvement

  • l mo On Friday, August 19, 2005, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    i know.. isn't it?

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Friday, August 19, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (358)By person wrote:

    LOL x 666 ... ... ... maybe this can be the lyrics to a song!

  • l mo On Friday, August 19, 2005, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    This was rewriiten with dave's suggestion. I hope you enjoyed it. -_-

  • l mo On Friday, August 19, 2005, l mo (55)By person wrote:

    rewritten* (my speling sucks ass today)

  • peril_notion On Friday, August 19, 2005, peril_notion (88)By person wrote:

    Interesting, indeed. ~Heather


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