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Chaotic Meditations
By GothicBlack
Slice the skin
Blood spilled
Crimson rain
Fallen hopes
Shattered minds
Darkness rules
Blind sight
Pain felt
Feelings lost
Broken skin
Bleeding eyes
Steaming acid
Time ticks away
People rot
Decaying thoughts
Sober stupidity
Poisoned lands
Dying earth
Screaming for a release
Only one night
Within my body
A winters chill
Starless night
Past memories
Sharpened glass
Piercing weapons
Sleepless life
Solemn expression
Simple scratch
Gauged attacks
Bandaged rapped
Cloths black
Insanity consumes
Sinful creatures
Bomb explosions
Frozen isolation
Doubtful tears
Magickal knives
Healing enemies
Dangerous friends
Empty thrown
Confused society
Pale, white skin
Shattered porcelain
Scarlet maze
Numb wrists
Collapsed body
Dead inside
Bleeding endlessly
For eternity
Until my end
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Copyright 2003 Gothic_Black
Comments on "Chaotic Meditations"
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On Friday, February 11, 2011, 10 Forty Three
(593)
wrote:
I love the structure to this! And the poem itself. Nicely done!
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On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
It's always about blood...always...blood gives life blood takes life. Wonderful again. I like the splattering of concepts that at first seem to have no meaning to one another but come together and support the whole so well. Tricky to do, but you pulled it
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On Tuesday, May 27, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
off. Nice write.~DW~
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A former member wrote:
so much has been said in so little words.. excellent
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On Saturday, April 12, 2003, Stranger
(264) wrote:
This is great poem. The style you have used is not easy pull off. But this works; and well! Every line. It left me with some intense images and emotions.
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A former member wrote:
very very good, yoru work never ceases to amaze me, gothic!
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On Wednesday, March 19, 2003, Ravenblade
(313) wrote:
That is a really good work. You have the same complex as I, you hate your own work, the only difference is you have real talent. I have a lot of work like this one, but I don't get the chance to post them for I have no time, or I'm reading others work
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On Tuesday, March 11, 2003, Rachel
(213) wrote:
I like very much.
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On Monday, March 10, 2003, maddin foxxxy
(358) wrote:
guess all those words apply to me
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