Blue Skies Granted - for Brian

By Savannah

The world, to you, seems cold right now
And you're locked out in the rain
But it will not last forever
Your sun will shine again

Your clothes will dry, your skin will warm
Those black storm clouds will part
And blue skies will be overhead
To soothe that aching heart

Until the storm is far away
And your sky is clear and blue
Just think about a warmer place
And I'll imagine too

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Copyright 2005 Savannah
Published on Friday, May 6, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Wednesday, October 10, 2007, carlosjackal (3016)By person wrote:

    Absolutely wonderful. This gives me fuzzles =) -Carl

  • blue On Saturday, September 23, 2006, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    rawr. =)

  • blue On Wednesday, August 31, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    :) thank you again.. still smiling :)

  • DarkDruidess On Friday, May 6, 2005, DarkDruidess (326)By person wrote:

    sweet...if only everyone had friends like this...

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    :)

  • K_Love On Friday, May 6, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    So sweet. Wonderful.

  • Sin On Friday, May 6, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    a beautiful tribute for a beautiful soul...lovely sentiment wrapped in a ribbon of kindness ~kristy

  • The Zebra Warrior On Friday, January 26, 2007, The Zebra Warrior (1521)By person wrote:

    beautiful soul?!?!?! Crook!!! :p

  • NikesRain On Friday, May 6, 2005, NikesRain (1298)By person wrote:

    beautiful indeed *bows*

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    o.O eh?!? Ya know, I've been going in circles all week, questioning everything...and you've slapped me in the face with the reasoning I couldn't find myself..not once today, but twice?

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    and, I certainly see it coming in this form! :) Thank you truly, you came out of nowhere and lifted me up.. I receive your beautiful words humbly and thankfully. You're a sweetheart! ~b

  • blue On Friday, May 6, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    *didn't see it coming.. :P You got me flustered..

  • AniDayz On Friday, May 6, 2005, AniDayz (820)By person wrote:

    i dont know if i have a right to comment on this...but this is absolutely beautiful...perfect for brian...

  • sIo On Friday, May 6, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    so sweet and beautiful...none could have done a better job :)

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