Bloody Night

By Sex Slave

Tears stream down my face as I see the blood

It starts to flow like a slow moving river

With darkness all around me and the image of your face

I push the razor deeper till the pain is all I feel

All I wanted was to have you love me

To take this razor from my hands

I left it up to you to save my life

You gave me the the razor and said, "do your best"

Walked away and left me in the dark

I hear your voice wispering all around me

Love is what I thought we had

Blood is the price for what you said

Now I lay here in the night with blood all around me

Clear tears suddenly turn red as the pain fades away

Memorys of the love I thought we had seem to rush on in

All I wanted was love but instead I got a bloody night

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Published on Monday, April 11, 2005. Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Bloody Night"

A former member wrote: Oh, Wow! I actually felt the pain, as i used to cut myself... I personally hope you didn't have to go through this again.
On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul (143) wrote:

i like it. it was sad and exciting at the same time. nice write ~gothicangel~
On Saturday, June 25, 2005, SorrowSoul (54) wrote:

A painfully depiction of love lost. Very good write.
On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976) wrote:

bah, bad cutter poem*kicks*...other than that. Yeah.*hugs Danielle*
On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, happilydepressed (400) wrote:

great write danny
On Monday, April 11, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309) wrote:

wow..i love this! where'd you get the inspiration from it? great work! :) -Kel
A former member wrote: I think this is wonderful. very very good write-ariel
On Monday, April 11, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

I agree with Tim. Good write. -Tart-
On Monday, April 11, 2005, Sex Slave (78) wrote:

thanx Tim-Danny
On Monday, April 11, 2005, Sex Slave (78) wrote:

I don't really think this rhymes...o well-Danny