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Bloody Night
By Sex Slave
Tears stream down my face as I see the blood
It starts to flow like a slow moving river
With darkness all around me and the image of your face
I push the razor deeper till the pain is all I feel
All I wanted was to have you love me
To take this razor from my hands
I left it up to you to save my life
You gave me the the razor and said, "do your best"
Walked away and left me in the dark
I hear your voice wispering all around me
Love is what I thought we had
Blood is the price for what you said
Now I lay here in the night with blood all around me
Clear tears suddenly turn red as the pain fades away
Memorys of the love I thought we had seem to rush on in
All I wanted was love but instead I got a bloody night
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Copyright 2005 Danielle Heyboer
Comments on "Bloody Night"
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A former member wrote:
Oh, Wow!
I actually felt the pain, as i used to cut myself...
I personally hope you didn't have to go through this again.
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On Tuesday, November 22, 2005, Lady Grinning Soul
(145)
wrote:
i like it. it was sad and exciting at the same time. nice write ~gothicangel~
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On Saturday, June 25, 2005, SorrowSoul
(54) wrote:
A painfully depiction of love lost. Very good write.
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
bah, bad cutter poem*kicks*...other than that. Yeah.*hugs Danielle*
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, happilydepressed
(409) wrote:
great write danny
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
wow..i love this! where'd you get the inspiration from it? great work! :) -Kel
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A former member wrote:
I think this is wonderful. very very good write-ariel
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
I agree with Tim. Good write. -Tart-
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
thanx Tim-Danny
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On Monday, April 11, 2005, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
I don't really think this rhymes...o well-Danny
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