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Tin Soldier
By Draven
I am the hero that every child needs
I am the soldier that every mother weeps
I am the one who is standing alone
I am the Tin Soldier that rides away
I am the savior of those who are in pain
I am the protecter of all those weaker than me
I am the one who is last seen
I am the Tin Soldier who rides away
I am in pain even though I dont look it
I am filled with sorrow for those I could not protect
I am wracked with the ruin I have seen
I am the Tin Soldier that rides away
the very last one to stand is...me
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Copyright 2004 Draven
Published on Wednesday, November 3, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Tin Soldier"
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On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, Grey Lies
(186)
wrote:
lovely write..
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On Thursday, February 17, 2005, Chimauron
(87) wrote:
"I am filled with sorrow for those I could not protect." ... "I am wracked with the ruin that I have seen." ... this is a very profound and meaningful write, especially to me. I love this work. This one is going on my favs list!
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On Thursday, December 2, 2004, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
awesome, such a feeling of... i dont know what... a feeling of admiration perhaps? =)
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On Monday, November 15, 2004, Sex Slave
(78) wrote:
so painfully do some stand alone, very depressing. :Danny
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was so painfully true.. profound... great write...
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On Wednesday, November 3, 2004, sIo
(926) wrote:
i can't bring words to this page to justify how much i love this poem and your work.
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