today was pe.rfe.ct

By BeautifulCalamity

today was almost perfect,
well- my mind was anyways. .
I let it fill me like love,
like dopamine pushing into my brain
-my heart.


like heroin to virgin veins

like wet tongues to dry places


the lights were off behind the sunglasses,
and plastic melted into the blotted black stars
around my eyes. .
Cause I wanted you

I wanted you,
just like I whispered with this fragile mouth. .

this broken mouth and face,
these broken bones & smiles

. . .

like acid at the ocean

like god inside your face

. . .


oh , the romance we create..
our imaginations never fail to amaze me.
maybe even the fairy tale lust was fake
.. and you shouldnt have known me today.

beauty tells me I'm in love with everything
every
single
word
.
every
scene
.
every
heart
.


I long to greet you in my dreams,
tonight- I'm gone.








- - -
This is kind of unfinished, but I've not posted in awhile so I thought I'd give some kind of sign I'm still around. Hmm. . I don't know, this is more of a thought than a poem. . it's not that good, but hopefully you find it. I miss you

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Copyright 2005 BeautifulCalamity
Published on Saturday, April 9, 2005.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • italianbella On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella (183)By person wrote:

    breathtakingly beautiful...your like a rare butterfly so many of your writes touch deeply

  • A former member wrote: Breathe taking.I never thought i'd appreciate someone's poetry as much as I do yours,you are so inspiring.

  • Black_Cherry_Doll_ On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_ (69)By person wrote:

    beautiful...Ican't wait for the ending

  • AniDayz On Friday, May 6, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    yeah...'this is not that good'---ITS BRILLIANT!!!!! you are. this has so many wonderous lines...a begining....well damn...WHAT a begining..and; i too, am awaiting the finished product. i have missed you---hurry back[!]

  • blue On Thursday, April 14, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    well damn, that's one hell of a start LeaghAnn!! "like god inside your face"?? how do you come up with this shit?!?!?! I can't wait to see the finished product dear Pinky. ~b

  • K_Love On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    "This is not that good" Pftttt! This is amazing, so many beautiful details, I'm glad to see a post from you, if you decide to finish I'm sure it will be beautiful as it already is. Lovely work!

  • Grey Lies On Sunday, April 10, 2005, Grey Lies (185)By person wrote:

    plastic melted into the blotted black stars ... fairy tale lust was fake wow...u have a gifted talent...like all ur works are wonderfully written...lovely write

  • Rone4611 On Sunday, April 10, 2005, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    like herion to virgin veins! Like god inside your face. my'frekin'God! If I could write like you... *dreams*


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