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today was pe.rfe.ct
By BeautifulCalamity
today was almost perfect,
well- my mind was anyways. .
I let it fill me like love,
like dopamine pushing into my brain
-my heart.
like heroin to virgin veins
like wet tongues to dry places
the lights were off behind the sunglasses,
and plastic melted into the blotted black stars
around my eyes. .
Cause I wanted you
I wanted you,
just like I whispered with this fragile mouth. .
this broken mouth and face,
these broken bones & smiles
. . .
like acid at the ocean
like god inside your face
. . .
oh , the romance we create..
our imaginations never fail to amaze me.
maybe even the fairy tale lust was fake
.. and you shouldnt have known me today.
beauty tells me I'm in love with everything
every
single
word
.
every
scene
.
every
heart
.
I long to greet you in my dreams,
tonight- I'm gone.
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This is kind of unfinished, but I've not posted in awhile so I thought
I'd give some kind of sign I'm still around. Hmm. . I don't know, this
is more of a thought than a poem. . it's not that good, but hopefully you
find it. I miss you
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Copyright 2005 BeautifulCalamity
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On Friday, December 28, 2007, italianbella
(185)
wrote:
breathtakingly beautiful...your like a rare butterfly so many of your writes touch deeply
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A former member wrote:
Breathe taking.I never thought i'd appreciate someone's poetry as much as I do yours,you are so inspiring.
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Black_Cherry_Doll_
(69) wrote:
beautiful...Ican't wait for the ending
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On Friday, May 6, 2005, AniDayz
(820) wrote:
yeah...'this is not that good'---ITS BRILLIANT!!!!! you are. this has so many wonderous lines...a begining....well damn...WHAT a begining..and; i too, am awaiting the finished product. i have missed you---hurry back[!]
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On Thursday, April 14, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
well damn, that's one hell of a start LeaghAnn!! "like god inside your face"?? how do you come up with this shit?!?!?! I can't wait to see the finished product dear Pinky. ~b
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On Wednesday, April 13, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
"This is not that good" Pftttt! This is amazing, so many beautiful details, I'm glad to see a post from you, if you decide to finish I'm sure it will be beautiful as it already is. Lovely work!
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On Sunday, April 10, 2005, Grey Lies
(186) wrote:
plastic melted into the blotted black stars ... fairy tale lust was fake wow...u have a gifted talent...like all ur works are wonderfully written...lovely write
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On Sunday, April 10, 2005, Rone4611
(123) wrote:
like herion to virgin veins! Like god inside your face. my'frekin'God! If I could write like you... *dreams*
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