mourning rain

By Armand

I wept at your funeral this morning.
It was hard to believe
That you would never make me laugh again
And there would be no more impromptu plans.
I didn't get a chance
To say goodbye;
We hadn't even spoken for a long time.
You were always busy
With your new friends.
I suppose the rain kept them away today.

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Comments on "mourning rain"

On Wednesday, April 8, 2009, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

still a very powerful, perfectly subtly understated piece; you're still among my best-of-the-bests, sir.
On Monday, May 29, 2006, Mari (419) wrote:

they make me sick what the hell man
On Monday, January 23, 2006, NikesRain (1240) wrote:

threaded sadness through hard reflections. the last line stinging sharp and precise... superb as always
A former member wrote: Incredible . . this is exceptional . . a superb write, eminent, poignant (i can't express my praise . . hopefully adding this to my faves will) ~ Rose
On Sunday, September 5, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl (243) wrote:

You are incredible... I'm awe-stricken.
On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

i have to echoe what others have said,strong feelings come across in this,an overwhelming mood
On Monday, May 24, 2004, aXe FactoR (333) wrote:

wow. left a stinging feel to my soul after reading this. short, it may be, but very powerful! :)
On Friday, February 27, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

why the hell have i not read this one before? *curses self* this is so powerful... fabulous piece. purr
On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

Very, very poigant!! ~DW~
On Friday, April 25, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

youre an artist...magician of words... toyer of emotion.... a brilliant mind.
On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, cre (410) wrote:

Incredible write. The last line is breathtaking.
On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, Midnight Phoenix (240) wrote:

Truly a sad occasion, and all too common. From what I have read, this is also a unique piece. Keep the ideas flowing!
A former member wrote: i can't find the words to do justice to this piece; very painful, to say the least.
A former member wrote: *pauses* That last line really did me in.
A former member wrote: *sheds a tear* wow....you inspire me...this is truely emotional.
A former member wrote: that was a aching photograph... almost too real and vivid to be real... superb write