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mourning rain
By Armand
I wept at your funeral this morning.
It was hard to believe
That you would never make me laugh again
And there would be no more impromptu plans.
I didn't get a chance
To say goodbye;
We hadn't even spoken for a long time.
You were always busy
With your new friends.
I suppose the rain kept them away today.
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On Wednesday, April 8, 2009, purr_verse
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wrote:
still a very powerful, perfectly subtly understated piece; you're still among my best-of-the-bests, sir.
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On Monday, May 29, 2006, Mari
(425) wrote:
they make me sick what the hell man
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On Monday, January 23, 2006, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
threaded sadness through hard reflections. the last line stinging sharp and precise... superb as always
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A former member wrote:
Incredible . . this is exceptional . . a superb write, eminent, poignant (i can't express my praise . . hopefully adding this to my faves will) ~ Rose
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On Sunday, September 5, 2004, CorruptedLittleGirl
(253) wrote:
You are incredible... I'm awe-stricken.
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On Saturday, August 21, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
i have to echoe what others have said,strong feelings come across in this,an overwhelming mood
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On Monday, May 24, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
wow. left a stinging feel to my soul after reading this. short, it may be, but very powerful! :)
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On Friday, February 27, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
why the hell have i not read this one before? *curses self* this is so powerful... fabulous piece. purr
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On Wednesday, May 28, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(511) wrote:
Very, very poigant!! ~DW~
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On Friday, April 25, 2003, liquid_emotion
(323) wrote:
youre an artist...magician of words... toyer of emotion.... a brilliant mind.
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, cre
(411) wrote:
Incredible write. The last line is breathtaking.
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On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Truly a sad occasion, and all too common. From what I have read, this is also a unique piece. Keep the ideas flowing!
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A former member wrote:
i can't find the words to do justice to this piece; very painful, to say the least.
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A former member wrote:
*pauses* That last line really did me in.
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A former member wrote:
*sheds a tear* wow....you inspire me...this is truely emotional.
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A former member wrote:
that was a aching photograph... almost too real and vivid to be real... superb write
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