Voice of The Whisperer

By Midnight Phoenix

Clouds and open windows so soothing like a frozen lake to a
Path of glitter reflecting thoughts held in the sun’s hand.
So ambient and lustrous the sands, but are they for me?
Like the passing of a lantern in midnight eye
She dims slowly and waits for her next arrival.

Staring at the endless stream of dust I find her waiting
Like a dream waiting to be lived, waiting to be seen.
So unnatural and beautiful, but is this for me?
Violet hues and moonlit paintings so dramatic
As the ink bleeds and a thousand words are hushed
We wait in silence while a single voice whispers an answer.

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Published on Tuesday, April 8, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Voice of The Whisperer"

On Thursday, April 19, 2007, torn_beauty (77) wrote:

this painted a picture in my head that I hope to keep. stunning. and to think I just stumbled across your work. I guess I need to read alot more!
On Sunday, December 25, 2005, weyvern (80) wrote:

worthy of a pro well done!
On Sunday, December 18, 2005, Sin (1168) wrote:

..theres not much i can say to this that hasnt already been said...beautifully portrayed ~kristy
On Thursday, July 8, 2004, nesbia (15) wrote:

i'm speechless
On Thursday, March 11, 2004, WinterGrave (258) wrote:

nice, beautiful flow.~~~Grave
A former member wrote: amazing, it is so beautiful. you have a gift for painting beautiful images into my mind with only words... that's rare. i can't wait to read more!
A former member wrote: beautiful work, simply beautiful, and it flows so well, you truely are amazing
A former member wrote: oh wow...i like this a lot.Its so enchanting,u have such a way with words.Lovely piece,almost elegant...Dusky..xxx...
On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246) wrote:

I wanted more, but then I did think that was the point.. and if thats the case you did it perfect.. other that that it's words of beauty and poetry finely put together.. Im amazed. Peter
On Monday, October 6, 2003, urbanhumility (1175) wrote:

beautifuly articulate, always having reverance for nature, your words an potent eatheral feel.............well done my friend..........urban
On Saturday, August 16, 2003, Saint_Reaper (203) wrote:

i like this one......keep up the good work.....~Saint_Reaper~
A former member wrote: this is rediculous... thats all i can say to this peom.. rediculous
On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246) wrote:

so productive... nice explanation to your point of wiew.. Peter
On Wednesday, July 9, 2003, anathema (50) wrote:

ink bleeds... that it does, and what beautiful blood it is. great write.
On Tuesday, June 10, 2003, manywalks (750) wrote:

The title makes me want to think of a Lovecraft piece; but the beauty of this shatters the silence this describes. ~ mw
On Monday, May 26, 2003, CharlottesWeb (511) wrote:

I feel overwhelmed by all the soft, flowing description that takes place in this work. Beautiful, warming...candescent really. Well done.~DW~
A former member wrote: Aazing another fellow minnesotan that can write ..keep it up!
On Wednesday, April 9, 2003, Armand (57) wrote:

your words flow masterfully like an artist's paintbrush against a canvas. yet i am distracted by a gentle cross breeze produced by the dramatic images. this is a teaser piece, for you've left me wanting to taste a few more beautiful images. bravo.