This Is [Yours]
By BeautifulCalamity
This is our moment
Draining out the ink from these words..
Draining limp, Draining bloodless
One day-- this will not be our hurt,
and time can pull us so far.
so/far
This, the shadow drips out of letters. .
out of words.
I saw us aging when I looked towards the sky
.took.another.hit.
a few more of anything means nothing,
nothing when woven into that desperate canvas..
and they cry together on scentless diamonds,
while I look back to watch them
and wonder. .
to build this up. and let it down.
falling fast. never very sure.
you/wantsomeone
.anyone.
to take this pain away-
to save you from yourself.
you're studded
Pierced over and over, marking of your lover.
of her. ofher. of her.
I shake touching my eyes.
Sipping out that liquor from the rolled paper
bliss. .
Not even hands, not even these miserable hands are worthy.
. . to speak to that paper.
-As long as you know my heart is gone.. .
as long as you can promise me-you'll not forget.
I.can.go.away.
Hair drifting in the wind,
eyes reaching..
Hands knowing and that voice,
that voice---it speaks.
my body. . . ..... . . was yours
my limbs.. . .. . . . . were yours
[I should have never called them the last kisses]
I never knew, but yesterday is so far away when you smile
.. . everyday you write your heart break.. .
"I love you"
.words.
forever, words
Comments on "This Is [Yours]"
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
wow...breathtaking write...its beautiful..
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A former member wrote:
good right ure so hot
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On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Zhee
(529) wrote:
"not even these miserable hands are worthy. . . to speak to that paper. " absolutely lovely... poignant and painful...
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A former member wrote:
"I never knew, but yesterday is so far away when you smile
.. . everyday you write your heart break.. ." Damn these lines hit hard as did the rest of the poem. Very nice. ~Ryan
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, Stormcomin
(32) wrote:
Outstanding emotion. Excellent piece!
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On Friday, February 11, 2005, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
emotion to the max b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Every emotion was pulled into this, heartbreaking write... I'm speechless hun. *tears* *hugs* Incredible job.. damn..
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
heartbreaking and beautiful. gorgeously expressed and so emotive. Lovely write.
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
...~b
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On Thursday, February 10, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
you continuosly amaze and colour me with such beauty of your words..amazing .i love every last breath of this.*