This Is [Yours]

By BeautifulCalamity

This is our moment

Draining out the ink from these words..
Draining limp, Draining bloodless

One day-- this will not be our hurt,
and time can pull us so far.

so/far

This, the shadow drips out of letters. .
out of words.
I saw us aging when I looked towards the sky
.took.another.hit.

a few more of anything means nothing,
nothing when woven into that desperate canvas..

and they cry together on scentless diamonds,
while I look back to watch them
and wonder. .

to build this up. and let it down.
falling fast. never very sure.

you/wantsomeone

.anyone.

to take this pain away-
to save you from yourself.

you're studded

Pierced over and over, marking of your lover.
of her. ofher. of her.
I shake touching my eyes.
Sipping out that liquor from the rolled paper
bliss. .

Not even hands, not even these miserable hands are worthy.
. . to speak to that paper.

-As long as you know my heart is gone.. .
as long as you can promise me-you'll not forget.

I.can.go.away.

Hair drifting in the wind,
eyes reaching..
Hands knowing and that voice,
that voice---it speaks.

my body. . . ..... . . was yours
my limbs.. . .. . . . . were yours

[I should have never called them the last kisses]

I never knew, but yesterday is so far away when you smile
.. . everyday you write your heart break.. .

"I love you"

.words.
forever, words

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Copyright 2005 BeautifulCalamity
Published on Thursday, February 10, 2005.     Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"
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  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    wow...breathtaking write...its beautiful..

  • A former member wrote: good right ure so hot

  • Zhee On Wednesday, February 16, 2005, Zhee (529)By person wrote:

    "not even these miserable hands are worthy. . . to speak to that paper. " absolutely lovely... poignant and painful...

  • A former member wrote: "I never knew, but yesterday is so far away when you smile .. . everyday you write your heart break.. ." Damn these lines hit hard as did the rest of the poem. Very nice. ~Ryan

  • Stormcomin On Friday, February 11, 2005, Stormcomin (32)By person wrote:

    Outstanding emotion. Excellent piece!

  • Rone4611 On Friday, February 11, 2005, Rone4611 (121)By person wrote:

    emotion to the max b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l

  • K_Love On Thursday, February 10, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Every emotion was pulled into this, heartbreaking write... I'm speechless hun. *tears* *hugs* Incredible job.. damn..

  • purr_verse On Thursday, February 10, 2005, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    heartbreaking and beautiful. gorgeously expressed and so emotive. Lovely write.

  • blue On Thursday, February 10, 2005, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    ...~b

  • AniDayz On Thursday, February 10, 2005, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    you continuosly amaze and colour me with such beauty of your words..amazing .i love every last breath of this.*


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