Moving Into Speckled Faces

By BeautifulCalamity



.. Forever ..
Moving in these words

moving
tearing
scraping
dreaming
weaving
moving

I am always moving
and
Should I decide to go
let this be my goodbye




Let this be my goodbye

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Copyright 2005 BeautifulCalamity
Published on Sunday, February 6, 2005.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • Solace On Saturday, March 5, 2005, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    *smiles* so wistful, like a just in case...if i choose to...let this be...wow...

  • Railway_Butterfly On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    I really don't know what to say to this.Theres so much I feel I want to say but..don't know that I should..

  • Railway_Butterfly On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Railway_Butterfly (354)By person wrote:

    I truly hope that this isn't a real final definate goodbye.. I would honestly be gutted if it was, and would be so sad to see you go..

  • Sepulcrawl On Tuesday, February 8, 2005, Sepulcrawl (78)By person wrote:

    This is interested. I think it's understated and even a bit powerful. ;] You certainly are worthwhile.

  • Rone4611 On Monday, February 7, 2005, Rone4611 (123)By person wrote:

    another from the legend herself, i pray this isn't your final good-bye Beautiful! I would miss you forever!!!!!!

  • Lynaes On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Lynaes (859)By person wrote:

    I seriously hope this isn't a real true goodbye..

  • A former member wrote: I really liked this. Such feeling behind it!

  • K_Love On Sunday, February 6, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    *tears* Hun, I do not want a goodbye either, yes you are truly not alone in this, if you ever need me I'm here, don't leave...

  • blue On Sunday, February 6, 2005, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    ...I refuse to accept a goodbye from you, more to the point~ you are always with me...life's tragedies are not and end, only a beginning in disquise...dear Pinky. You are not alone dear...~b

  • Six-Out On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    Fuck you. You're not going anywhere.

  • Ravenblade On Sunday, February 6, 2005, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    very subtle, and I think everyone writes a goodbye, but few actually say it...I wish you the best in your endeavors, and hope to see you around...>Raven

  • The Crimson Queen On Sunday, February 6, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    i dont like goodbyes..


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