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Daddy
By Sex Slave
You've been gone all my life
I've seen you only twice
I can't even remember your face
Where were you when I said my first word?
Why weren't you there to see me walk?
As I grew into a woman, why weren't you there?
You never got a chance to learn who I was
You say your sorry and that things will change
But they never do
So Daddy I'm sorry but I don't want to know you
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Copyright 2004 Danielle Heyboer
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On Thursday, April 20, 2006, mywristshurt
(408)
wrote:
i could say the same thing about my mom.. once again, i can relate and this was really good
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On Thursday, May 12, 2005, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
Sweetheart, dad's like yours and mine are all the same, however, we know something they don't...we know what NOT to do, and we also know what much their missing out by knowing us...Keep your chin up, girl*hugs*
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On Sunday, April 24, 2005, Kinkypoptart
(555) wrote:
I know the feeling well, although even fatherless, I don't feel that i've been affected by it. My father however, did see my first step, first word and watched my first tooth come in... Not that I can remember that though. Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Tuesday, February 22, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(918) wrote:
crap..this makes me want to go and hurt my own absent father.....great write, i agree with darkangel's comment..you wrote this respectfully yet you seem as if your screaming in the background..I know exactly how this feels..
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, darkangelXlll
(108) wrote:
i loved it and the way you layed it down was so beautyful. respectful but yet telling him off in a way. you sounded normal but screaming in the background. this was wonderful. ~darlin :D
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A former member wrote:
i can only wish...
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On Tuesday, December 21, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108) wrote:
That was quite a poerful write. The message loud and clear. I liked it. Very good write.
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A former member wrote:
nice write... i can kinda relate... my fathers never really been around and when he is... well i wont get into that but nice write...
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful and elegantly written and yet tinged with a strange permanent sadness. The last line pierced me like the morning cold..
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, Draven
(45) wrote:
ouch that last line hurt like everyone else said your a better person because of it
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A former member wrote:
very nice write
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Soulfire
(97) wrote:
As funny as it may seem, you are who you are today because he WAS NOT in your life...you are beautiful! I too can relate to this.
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On Monday, December 6, 2004, Nesfurata
(58) wrote:
Wow, very profound. I really liked it, reminds me a lot of my own father and few a poems I've written. He's better off without you anyway. -Elizabeth
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