On Monday June 7th, 2004, Vixen (135) writes:
.....And all the waters over Egypt turned to blood, as was God's curse over mankind.....Bleh! Cool pic, though!~Lauren

On Monday June 7th, 2004, Fish (852) writes:
to defy death... brave man. your frustration and defiance bleed off the piece. see you in hell ;-)

On Monday June 7th, 2004, Vicious_June (769) writes:
I really love this...my favorite of yours so far...the stone appears so delicate in an ocean of red.

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, taken_for_eternity (35) writes:
damn that scared me. it made me cringe so bad

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, mistress_shadow (59) writes:
Great to see you share your art work with inspired thought. It's all touching. ~T~

On Tuesday June 8th, 2004, Burgundy (1) writes:
awesome piece! if only i could find that stone...

On Friday June 11th, 2004, griffin (193) writes:
"just because they serve you, doesn't mean they like you"

On Friday June 11th, 2004, indulgentwanderer (1) writes:
You are fucked up

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, DarkFairy (396) writes:
Now that I have read this a couple times..I find it really disturbing that my name is amanda also...you are awsome with these nasty little tales..keep em comming. -Fairy-

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, DarkFairy (396) writes:
wow..I am at a loss for words once again..

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Psuedo_Me (533) writes:
wow, lols. it took me so long to find kissing step-sisters 1..that time i only managed to see 2 & 3 as i'm lost in the long list of works u have. glad i read this.

On Saturday June 12th, 2004, Psuedo_Me (533) writes:
very entertaining & a great and wicked kick-start to the rest of the step-sisters tale. -MeL-

On Sunday June 13th, 2004, Psuedo_Me (533) writes:
lol, king of entertaining naughty tales... i salute u. hope to see more chapters of these... keep it coming & i will keep on reading... :) -MeL-

On Monday June 14th, 2004, sacred_slave (699) writes:
you are so creatiuve ,very nice~ss

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, sacred_slave (710) writes:
hehe i really like your work its so creative,i think you should continue the other babysitting one too but this ones good i like it when the girl takes control -wink-~ss

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, sacred_slave (710) writes:
oh man another another. im lovin it ;)~ss

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Six-Out (1299) writes:
um....

On Tuesday June 15th, 2004, Psuedo_Me (560) writes:
lol... that was interesting read although it was short. i enjoyed reading the whole series. :)

On Friday June 18th, 2004, DarkFairy (421) writes:
Haha, these just keep on getting better and better...

On Sunday June 20th, 2004, blackdarkness (401) writes:
nice....

On Sunday June 20th, 2004, blackdarkness (401) writes:
YAY!!!! do another...hides from the gun...sorry iam broke

On Sunday June 20th, 2004, blackdarkness (401) writes:
Damn...I want to make a $1000...*looks for people who need babysitters*

On Wednesday June 23rd, 2004, DarkFairy (425) writes:
*throughs cash at you* More!

On Thursday June 24th, 2004, Lifeless (16) writes:
Is this your kid's work? A six year old could do better in MSPaint.

On Monday June 28th, 2004, Lifeless (38) writes:
At least you're honest to yourself.

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, Rachel (183) writes:
Anyone ever tell you you're a jackass? They were right.

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, Lifeless (38) writes:
Nope. Never.

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, Loserland (134) writes:
nice rythmn ..good subject

On Tuesday June 29th, 2004, sacred_slave (905) writes:
mmhmm gorgoues

On Tuesday July 6th, 2004, Poisonous Mercury (3) writes:
hmmm..i don't quiet get it...but there is something about it...i don't know...it's different...hmmmm...interesting....

On Tuesday July 6th, 2004, Syn (138) writes:
Hmmm...now this must have take a LOT of imagination *rolls eyes* Isn't there a way to mark pornographic work 18+? This was just kinda gross. -Syn

On Tuesday July 6th, 2004, roachy (659) writes:
it is marked for 18+ you dummy and nobody made you read it now go away, bye bye

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, Syn (138) writes:
Why do I have to be a dummy? I just asked if there was a way...You go away...Bye Bye.

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, sacred_slave (933) writes:
This was quite the turn on im lovin it ;) ~ss

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, serpentine_fire (240) writes:
mmm i like this alot. makes me wish my hubby was home hehe. nice write ~serpentine~

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1054) writes:
could be a newB write.. or it could be a write to realise some kinda pain.. errmmm.. what the fuck do I know of poetry.. *dances and steals a banana*

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, sacred_slave (933) writes:
LOL you are so funny i lvoe you :P:P: your a loser but this is great lol where do u get these ideas :O ~ss

On Wednesday July 7th, 2004, roachy (661) writes:
this my work you go away bye bye

On Thursday July 8th, 2004, Orion (3) writes:
I love them all.... cant read it enough

On Friday July 9th, 2004, mistress_shadow (66) writes:
hmm, violently moving. :) ~T~

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, Lynaes (1345) writes:
I adore this. So perfect for the girl you drew the inspiration from. I loved the fourth stanza especially. Great work.

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, Complete Circle (15) writes:
love the feeling you placed into this...the imagry it cause and emotions it provokes...simply wonderful

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, June Ceases To Exist (1039) writes:
*smiles* You know I love this, Ian. I feel honored that you'd write something for me...

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, sacred_slave (936) writes:
I know monkey shes leaving us -cries- Thisis realy nice i like it!~ss

On Saturday July 10th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1069) writes:
june is leaving us... but why :O(

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1158) writes:
haha 0.0 -- was funny cryz.. :O) err ennyways.. this was not bad at all..

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, Crystal Passion (353) writes:
0.0

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, icyhott (47) writes:
i can almost hear a beat behind this nice write *hott*

On Saturday July 24th, 2004, Crystal Passion (353) writes:
tragic and lyrical

On Monday July 26th, 2004, Twilight (1781) writes:
weird...looks like there are stitches on the neck. creative work.

On Monday July 26th, 2004, phantasmagoria (412) writes:
Gee that sounds like an awesome job. I can't wait to start working again.

On Thursday July 29th, 2004, Northstar (226) writes:
oooooohhh--this is nice--i have a poem that reflects this one called Lion--perhaps I will post it for you--anyway this is beautifully written--definitely piqued my interest

On Wednesday August 25th, 2004, Apathy (39) writes:
couldn't agree more

On Monday August 30th, 2004, Gertrud (3) writes:
Uitstekend! Excellent! Fantastic!

On Saturday September 11th, 2004, Dayer (342) writes:
twisted writing

On Wednesday October 6th, 2004, urbanhumility (803) writes:
true to heart, true to honesty, the closest to truth you are..........well done .........urban

On Friday October 8th, 2004, SCANDAL (127) writes:
I can definitely feel this one...Beautifully written and creatively expressed...I love it!!!*ScaNdaL*

On Saturday October 30th, 2004, Zhee (1233) writes:
i agree... especially that right now at 1:50 am i am stuck in the hospital :(

On Wednesday November 3rd, 2004, Danny (66) writes:
nifty

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, sexually_sadistic (709) writes:
very cool. the stations in my head are always filled with static :P ~sex~

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Lotophagi (189) writes:
awesome write..... the rhythm is just superb in my head, melodic rap or something....... the idea in itself just rocks..... Thank you.

On Saturday November 6th, 2004, Life is Beautiful (130) writes:
sounds like you can't stop thinking....if thats not the case i still like the write.

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, BloodRoseWolf (549) writes:
lmao ok that was fuckin awesome, perverted, but awesome none the less

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, DarkWolf (720) writes:
LOL *waves and points* Perv! Perv! we have a Perv here! Nice write.. but there are some places alcohol should not go.. can cause burning.. lol -Michael

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, knightmirror (447) writes:
oh my god.....this was like reading a story from penthouse letters...lmmfao....awesome write here...a little perverted...but i enjoyed....lol...thanks for sharing-knight

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, DarkWolf (720) writes:
This is cool.. I may post some of my art sometime.. your inspiring me.. -Michael

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, DarkWolf (720) writes:
lol.. ya man.. owning property is the way to go.. -Michael

On Sunday November 7th, 2004, DarkWolf (720) writes:
Oh man.. the tree is cut and the water has dried up.. how sad.. -Michael

On Tuesday November 9th, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1102) writes:
nice dude.. gave me back alot of fun time memories.. *kisses his big pile of commics

On Wednesday November 10th, 2004, sinfully_decadent (277) writes:
this was lovely... ~kristy

On Friday November 26th, 2004, Valentine (650) writes:
disturbing yet somehow utterly appealing . . probably because it is wonderfully written. Astounding work! ~ Rose

On Sunday November 28th, 2004, blueskiesdenied (216) writes:
oh how the black widow dances! that was so cool!! A+ b

On Sunday November 28th, 2004, blueskiesdenied (216) writes:
Transformation is never easy. I dig the changing tempo, quite appropriate. b.

On Wednesday December 1st, 2004, odetobarbie (15) writes:
a creative perspective given an honorable voice. bravo.

On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (689) writes:
awww*hugs Ian* this is sad...I'm glad your home and feeling better!

On Wednesday January 5th, 2005, Draven (111) writes:
glad your out Ian, and a very nice wright

On Sunday January 9th, 2005, DarkWolf (713) writes:
Awesome.. dark, erotic, and wonderfully twisted.. -Michael

On Monday January 10th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (740) writes:
very sexy and full of kink. just the way i like it :P sounds like fun! ~sex~

On Monday January 10th, 2005, phantasmagoria (908) writes:
Pornographic... and not much else.

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, butterfly stitches (468) writes:
nobody likes a quitter. you'll get better with time and you know we'd all miss you around here. it wouldnt be the same without you. *snuggle*

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, Dancing_Monkey (1253) writes:
well, see ya .. *smiles and hides it away* .. *mumbles: he should never
had let his misses enter*

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, Deadly Embrace (75) writes:
This was beautifully written, however, I don't agree with some points of it. Everyone has their own writing style, which makes everyones work worth reading. Well done -de

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (743) writes:
i dont think that you should leave, and you are far from out of place here. i really enjoyed chatting with you the last few days and it really touched me that you dedicated a poem to me.

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (743) writes:
if you ever need someone to talk to i will listen. there has got to be something more to this pain than feeling ignored.~sex~

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (692) writes:
no!*chains Ian to his compy* You can't leave, 'cause we love you(and because I said so, yes, I know, it has NO effect, but hey, I tried)...But I guess if you leave I'll miss you lots and I'm sure everyone else will too!*hugs*

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, SilentStalker (855) writes:
...I've strayed from here many times, usually for the same reasons every time...but I never could stay away...like chris said, do what you have to; we'll welcome you with open arms should you find your way back here...once a friend, always a friend...

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, SunThor (31) writes:
Good Journey's Roachy although I cant see how anyone would not like it here.

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, phantasmagoria (928) writes:
For many, DP seems to be more of a waypoint than a destination. If you do decide to leave, I hope we've sent you off with some good provisions for the road ahead... and you can always come back if you need us. ;)

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, ardneK (16) writes:
don't leave! ;P - >|

On Tuesday January 11th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (743) writes:
this was awesome. erotic as fuck. roachy if you werent married i would marry you at this minute. this sent pure pleasure through my skin!

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, sinfully_decadent (654) writes:
lol..you look very happy

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Bestrafer Engel (277) writes:
Your take on doonsbury's guy? he he awesome.

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, JiNx (233) writes:
That looks really cool, hmm I like it -JiNx(ie)

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, JiNx (233) writes:
hmm I think you'd be good at glass art.. -JiNx(ie)

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, JiNx (233) writes:
Nope your not aloud to leave! *chains you to the dp couch* -JiNx(ie)

On Wednesday January 12th, 2005, Elise (39) writes:
*stands accidentally on money's tail wearing spike heels while cuffing roachy to the computer* You know I love you and stuff, but I finally get Deeter back on here, you can't wander off like he did.

On Thursday January 13th, 2005, Lydia Jade (720) writes:
Dont leave us roachy we all love you and respect your words...besides im a broken record too...we all are a spose

On Thursday January 13th, 2005, DoctorAsh (566) writes:
lol, you cant leave - this place owns you - I bet 30 bucks cash ducket - that if you do leave, you will be back sooner or later - I guarentee it (like the men's warehouse guy)

On Friday January 14th, 2005, j00 f33r (624) writes:
interesting...very creative I agree.

On Friday January 14th, 2005, sexually_sadistic (757) writes:
this brings very familiar feelings to my mind. great ryhme and flow! ~sex~

On Friday January 14th, 2005, spaniellie (105) writes:
great write. i enjoyed the flow, and rhyme.

On Monday January 17th, 2005, phantasmagoria (1010) writes:
This reminds me a little of the end of Garden State, but without the happy conclusion. It also played out somewhat like a musical in my head. Interesting form you've got here... nice work, roachy; keep them coming.

On Monday January 17th, 2005, braindead_poet (524) writes:
do it. dont even question yourself. i've been in this seat before, drinking this cup of tea. i dont mean to sound like a moron, but do it; if you feel that it's what you should do, just do it. dont worry about anything; not the money, not anything.

On Monday January 17th, 2005, phantasmagoria (1010) writes:
Hey roachy! I'm glad you decided to stay and have taken a step away from pornography into a more poetic direction. This was a very smooth, Bob Dylan-esque ride; I enjoyed it a lot. Keep the words flowing!

On Monday January 17th, 2005, elisa2 (451) writes:
you really captured the anticipation in this.........I have also been in this frame of mind (more than you can imagine) I always go to Sedona when I feel like this:) elisa

On Monday January 17th, 2005, dropsofhate (90) writes:
this is amazingly wonderful! wording is perfect. you have beautiful talent.

On Saturday January 22nd, 2005, island warrior (119) writes:
Whatever you do just keep on writing.

On Sunday January 30th, 2005, ColdBloodTheory (1002) writes:
thats insain

On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, The Red Phenix (17) writes:
HER STEP DAD!!!!!!

On Wednesday February 2nd, 2005, The Red Phenix (17) writes:
WOW! Nice read!

On Sunday February 6th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (114) writes:
fucking intense beautiful -kitty

On Tuesday February 8th, 2005, happilydepressed (133) writes:
i like this it's cool and very different

On Thursday February 10th, 2005, broken smile (10) writes:
omg! you rock so much.this was hilarious. i've read all of the babysitting and step-sister stories too... very hot.

On Thursday February 10th, 2005, broken smile (10) writes:
pure fucking genious. i love your twisted sense of humor

On Friday February 11th, 2005, elisa (621) writes:
lol...'phalanx'....a very distinct word...you rock:) elisa

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, worthless (20) writes:
Loved it!! awsomely done

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, AniDayz (671) writes:
very nice rhythmic flow...captivating. i hear a beat to this piece inmy head flowing with the words...i like it very much.

On Saturday February 12th, 2005, Cellar_Door (103) writes:
i really like the begining and the chorus, but to be honest, the fourth and fifth stanza were a bit boring to me. nice write anywayz! i can relate very well. ^Autumn^

On Sunday February 13th, 2005, CharlottesWeb (631) writes:
Strange....you look in reality the way you did in my mind. And no one looks their best when they've got such a glum expression hun, but your far from ugly.

On Wednesday February 16th, 2005, Green-eyed Raven (60) writes:
*Laughs he ass off* that was hilarious. *Raven*

On Thursday February 17th, 2005, Daegonna (54) writes:
wow i love it... Daegonna

On Thursday February 17th, 2005, AniDayz (719) writes:
this is wonderful. and what you mentioned as your *so called singing* well..its SINGING so don't downplay it eh?!; )...VERYNICE.

On Thursday February 17th, 2005, dark master (35) writes:
the down load dousent work but it is pritty good

On Thursday February 17th, 2005, TheLastDragon (100) writes:
The download isn't working for me... I want to hear it!

On Thursday February 17th, 2005, TheLastDragon (100) writes:
Some parts are actually quite deep, but others do a great job of mocking gangster rap in general. Great job

On Friday February 18th, 2005, frozen (1782) writes:
This is just simply awesome.

On Friday February 18th, 2005, frozen (1782) writes:
It kept me enthralled, right to the very end.

On Friday February 18th, 2005, very conflicted (20) writes:
vampires rock! awesome write.

On Monday February 21st, 2005, PointlessX (72) writes:
"Lost in this illusion Filled with tension Lost on this plane Made of pain .."--i likes these lines the most--this reminded me of my poem "Nowhere To Be Found", great write!

On Friday February 25th, 2005, gothic_amerikan_poet (237) writes:
wow did you like watch a vampire movie or somethin....nice write ~~GOTHICA~~

On Sunday March 6th, 2005, mistress_shadow (69) writes:
I currently don't have speakers, but I like the piece, good to see your still producing pieces, hope all is well too dispite ~T~

On Sunday March 6th, 2005, mistress_shadow (69) writes:
I don't know which is more disturbing: this piece or the fact that I read it all and was slightly aroused. ~T~

On Tuesday March 15th, 2005, emolovesick (45) writes:
oddly arousing! I like

On Wednesday March 16th, 2005, Saint_Reaper (215) writes:
so simple and so cool...~saint~

On Thursday April 14th, 2005, Kinkypoptart (176) writes:
Very good write. I like the metaphors and the wording. Flows very smoothly too. Good job. ~*~Tart~*~

On Friday April 22nd, 2005, Kinkypoptart (548) writes:
short and to the point, just the way that I like them ~*~Tart~*~

On Thursday April 21st, 2005, Kinkypoptart (400) writes:
Good write ~*~Tart~*~

On Sunday May 1st, 2005, Kinkypoptart (689) writes:
Very clever, indeed. Not exactly what I was expecting, but thats a good thing. Great write ~*~Tart~*~

On Friday May 6th, 2005, DeathsAngel_39647 (54) writes:
nice

On Monday May 9th, 2005, TearofTheFlame (33) writes:
All I can say is it is wonderful.

On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Serenity (444) writes:
^_^ Awesome lyrics. And nice singing.....

On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Serenity (444) writes:
I loved this. Awesome write :)

On Sunday May 22nd, 2005, Serenity (444) writes:
I love vampire pieces. And this is just too damn good. Nice capture :)

On Monday May 30th, 2005, blood stained oppression (547) writes:
amazing lyrics

On Tuesday June 7th, 2005, Invirion (11) writes:
This would make a good song.

On Monday June 27th, 2005, braindead_poet (570) writes:
I was expecting something other than this, to tell the truth.

On Monday June 27th, 2005, Gothic_forever_bloodredroses (33) writes:
I have written a few poems like this I like this one alot!!

On Wednesday June 29th, 2005, xYourXWordsXStainx (9) writes:
I like this piece, I can relate a bit. Keep up your good work

On Monday August 1st, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (586) writes:
catchy

On Sunday July 31st, 2005, emilyeatsbluetangarines (32) writes:
sometimes it's just too much for one to handle and shit like this occurs. That's why school shootings occur no because music but because people are dicks. I really liked it.

On Sunday July 31st, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (1140) writes:
emotional...brutally done. good job.

On Sunday July 31st, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (1140) writes:
there's always a little hope, you serve someone a purpose in life, and it's a good one at that....*hugs*

On Thursday August 4th, 2005, Sticky Kitty (384) writes:
Why dont YOU get on YOUR knees?? Than we might be able to work out some kind of deal. ;) -kitty

On Thursday August 4th, 2005, serotonin lost (194) writes:
go the dominator!!!! to bad i'm male.....

On Thursday August 4th, 2005, Lotophagi (547) writes:
rah! very enticing...... I'm very tempted at this offer *growls like a pup*

On Thursday August 4th, 2005, The Bard of Blasphemy (239) writes:
the scary thing is you will probably get some offers! Not me though... unless the price is right ;)

On Saturday August 6th, 2005, Grim_Sorrow (35) writes:
YOU SUCK

On Sunday August 7th, 2005, CharlottesWeb (615) writes:
Mmmm...Your work has changed. It's nice...I like.

On Saturday August 20th, 2005, anth (2170) writes:
not sure on the title, i still love these works of yours tho, theres a kind of abstract unearthly solitude

On Saturday August 20th, 2005, sIo (893) writes:
i don't get it.

On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, elisa (1037) writes:
yup.......my mind went right in the gutter....erectus shroomism;)

On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, suicideseason (2979) writes:
Phallic Crystal...

On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, phantasmagoria (1085) writes:
Ever see The Dark Crystal? It reminds me of that.

On Wednesday August 24th, 2005, kuro bara (429) writes:
nice..i could say something...but i wont..cuz im not thinking in the gutter this morning..but..very nice..did you draw this? -Kel

On Thursday August 25th, 2005, The Bard of Blasphemy (329) writes:
man... that schlong could use some moisturiser... it looks pretty chapped... i wonder how it got that way =D

On Saturday August 27th, 2005, King_Crazy_Dave (441) writes:
vagina?

On Friday September 2nd, 2005, Mistress Shadow (146) writes:
*Neat*

On Friday September 2nd, 2005, blueskiesdenied (1366) writes:
none of belong anywhere and at the same time we belong everywhere.. look inside for your answers not to others who surely cannot hold your truths.. it's all inside my man. ~b

On Friday September 2nd, 2005, Mistress Shadow (146) writes:
Luckily you didn't leave. And you don't write the 'same old stuff;' look at how your style has changed and grown through your works. Take care roachy. ~T~

On Monday September 5th, 2005, The Sacremento Surprise (12) writes:
Seen this kinda stuff before, do you do anything original? All this Vampire Malarky, its only plausable during the night, they seem a bit lazy during the day. When everyone else is working hard trying to make ends meet, what are they doing? Sleeping that

On Sunday September 11th, 2005, aefyr (32) writes:
To be honest I don't fully get it but I like the simplicity.



On Sunday September 18th, 2005, Drea (1076) writes:
I have to say.. this is a tasteless. So many people died and there is so much pain there..and you just make is seem like they had it coming. Almost an, "Oh well" attitude. It's really disgusting. This just wasn't....*shakes head*

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, glasshouse (755) writes:
Agreed. I sincerely hope that you and your family are never put in a situation (which you have no control over, btw) like this one. If you were, your eyes would undoubtedly be open and you would see fit to delete this piece of garbage. -Glass

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (430) writes:
I assure you if you worked closely with these "sinners".. Cried with them.. Hugged them.. Saw the emotive in their eyes.. And got a simple "thank you" from one of them as you were wiping away their tears..

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (430) writes:
you would gag on this horrible attempt of 'poetry'.

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, Drea (1076) writes:
*agrees*

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (1659) writes:
I think I already gagged..but then, wasn't that the point?

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, BleedSilver (478) writes:
I understand the thought put behind this, and I have to say it was pretty dumb to build a city on floodlands. But then again, I would have to agree with glasshouse.

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, BleedSilver (478) writes:
It is not very nice of you to exploit others pains. JUst leave em alone, ya know?

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, glasshouse (755) writes:
i gotta say... not only was this poorly written and ridiculously heartless (there are people on this site who lived or had family there) but in general... it's unfounded.

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, glasshouse (755) writes:
a hurricane has nothing to do with the sin of man or innocents and rebuilding a city should never rest on the shoulders of the people who did stupid shit like shoot rescuers. and if you arent living that momen, you have NO idea how to assess it

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, glasshouse (755) writes:
ballsy, i'll admit. but it sounds like a cry for controversy and attention. in fact, i'm kind of sad that i fed into that side of you. only proving a point though.

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (1659) writes:
Pray you, Jess.

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (430) writes:
I don't like the content of this write at all.

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, Elegant Kiss (430) writes:
Actually, if you exclude the horrible content.. I don't like the write at all either.

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, blood stained oppression (532) writes:
hmm

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, Existentialism on Prom Night (93) writes:
um i think some people like living.

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, Existentialism on Prom Night (93) writes:
even though theyve lost everything.

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, Evil (590) writes:
so.. this means what? everyone that lived in new orleans was a bad person? dont be shallow.

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, S R Parke (463) writes:
yeah...I've got a better solution...let's just wait another couple hundred thousand years of the geocycle and we'll all be extinct then..

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, blood stained oppression (532) writes:
how violent. lol

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (1659) writes:
Shall I crack your skull now or later?

On Sunday September 18th, 2005, Existentialism on Prom Night (93) writes:
interesting...but what did they do to you?

On Saturday September 17th, 2005, AHHH (179) writes:
aha, lovely. you've painted such a beautiful picture here.

On Monday September 19th, 2005, all apologies (16) writes:
i agree with everything that everybody has already said here. this is tasteless...

On Monday September 19th, 2005, the_lost_shadow (46) writes:
man i don't know what to comment here to be honest with you...i can't find the depth of these lines

On Tuesday September 20th, 2005, MelvinOliverDrauma (626) writes:
smiles

On Monday September 19th, 2005, Doc (171) writes:
Aahhh, its like my head, exploding into a torential downpour of internally violent thought and obsession. Intriguing. Peace, Doc

On Tuesday September 20th, 2005, the_lost_shadow (47) writes:
this is what you call a dream? scary...

On Tuesday September 20th, 2005, the_lost_shadow (47) writes:
Damn good that's all i can say Ian

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, Jerrica (24) writes:
very true very true.

On Wednesday September 21st, 2005, Jerrica (24) writes:
awsome. very cute, yet sadistic somehow. i likie!!!

On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, glasshouse (768) writes:
is that a hurricane striking you? that would be ironic, now wouldn't it? -Glass

On Friday September 23rd, 2005, Lotophagi (569) writes:
haha, my pleasure ;) this was just delicious.....

On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, Jerrica (38) writes:
I really savor this one Darth, it got me very excited! Love the twist at the end, wanna be master? haha

On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, Raven (398) writes:
Wasn't quite certain where this was leading until the last stanza, and then I couldn't help but grin. I love how the tables turn, depending on how the game turns out. Creative and most enjoyable...

On Thursday September 22nd, 2005, lostshadow (17) writes:
good god man you should write for hustler or something i had some sort of an idea of what this story was gonna be about but i was wrong good job i like how you wrote in a play format nice work

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, TheOneAndOnlySam (456) writes:
HA HA HA! oh my...

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, Eladrim (83) writes:
brilliant...i relate with alot of it, the cigarette...the frustration -Jesse

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (1831) writes:
..vast improvement..you actually appeared..*gasp*..human..but, the write, in itself, was contradictory..you miss your son, but you don't give a damn..what?

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, FallenTree (53) writes:
I especially loved the first five parts... Yes, I did...

On Tuesday September 27th, 2005, wonderlandhysteria (1831) writes:
Hmm...you need to choose an identity and stick with it...roach, magician, jedi-person, and now..zombie?

On Thursday October 6th, 2005, Thorn (260) writes:
*smile* ...I like it. Ain't it great to be crazy?

On Thursday October 6th, 2005, mysticventures (750) writes:
:0

On Thursday October 6th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (155) writes:
I can't believe no one has mentioned how erotic this really is. Ahem, nice work :) ~T~

On Sunday October 9th, 2005, Nowhereagain (19) writes:
i love this work your words feel like they came right out of my head..

On Sunday October 9th, 2005, TheOneAndOnlySam (484) writes:
great rhyme scheme, and i love the message you present. great write. ....-samone

On Tuesday October 11th, 2005, blackdarkness (376) writes:
Sex...there are so many ways to describe it!!! this one is very Real!! i like that =)

On Friday October 14th, 2005, Shatterdtearsangl (1) writes:
omfg! Ok even though I am a girl. Damn I am sooo eroused.. this is soo freaking hawt! nice job keep up the work! shatterdtearsangl

On Sunday October 16th, 2005, Shatterdtearsangl (2) writes:
OMG!! THIS IS TOOOO AWSOME! really eroused now.. LOL ^-^. I love your writings! OMFG i wish i could write that good. Sarah

On Thursday October 20th, 2005, Nail Bunny (125) writes:
that's pretty fuckin tight!

On Saturday October 22nd, 2005, tldiggster (3) writes:
We are all sinners. The earth was flooded once because of us. Shouldn't we all be flooded again? Not just New Orleans. Young and dumb, I miss those days when tasteless and shocking was cool. It made living with yourself much easier.

On Sunday October 23rd, 2005, BloodySparrow (51) writes:
Is... that.... a tree....it somehow reminds me of the n64 legend of zelda

On Monday October 24th, 2005, Redbudyz (4) writes:
OMG!These storys rock. Some of the better ones iv read

On Tuesday October 25th, 2005, Syndromik (3) writes:
That's how you do it, KILL FOR NO FUCKIN' REASON!!! If you don't know them, they're less likely to haunt ya, nice piece.

On Sunday October 30th, 2005, SMURFS_ARE_ALIVE (49) writes:
roachland has no roaches :(

On Sunday October 30th, 2005, Err0r (284) writes:
Wow. I wish I could say so much more, just I'm astouned at the familiarity of this. What a torch to the heart. Great.

On Sunday October 30th, 2005, SMURFS_ARE_ALIVE (49) writes:
the last word rhyming in this just made it brilliant :)

On Sunday October 30th, 2005, SMURFS_ARE_ALIVE (49) writes:
the lyrics remind me of so much pain and tournemnt

On Friday November 4th, 2005, DoomTroll (17) writes:
true

On Friday November 4th, 2005, gothicangel (36) writes:
nice write

On Friday November 4th, 2005, Err0r (345) writes:
Scary.

On Friday November 4th, 2005, Err0r (345) writes:
Just a random thought, Do you think you could pay a hooker to clean your house? If so, I would totally do that. Also this was an incredibly enticing write. Rawr. Thats all I can say. :)

On Sunday November 6th, 2005, DoomTroll (25) writes:
i like it. wonderful

On Sunday November 6th, 2005, happilydepressed (257) writes:
awesome, i fucked my babysitter, thats a fantasy of many young boys if she's hot

On Sunday November 6th, 2005, Err0r (366) writes:
You have such a dirty mind, pure genius! Definitely got me flustered thats for sure. :D

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, manywalks (1077) writes:
Ohhhh, I rather like. ~ mw

On Sunday November 13th, 2005, gothicangel (47) writes:
it is long man. but is is a nice write i have to admit. ~gothicangel~

On Tuesday November 15th, 2005, SMURFS_ARE_ALIVE (51) writes:
i like it so does he like her or what ???

On Wednesday November 16th, 2005, farlem (15) writes:
a time will come

On Wednesday November 16th, 2005, Rain In The Willows (1153) writes:
I can't even imagine how it must feel to be witout him, Ian, I'm sorry...

On Thursday November 17th, 2005, coly (59) writes:
that looks aswome

On Thursday November 17th, 2005, SMURFS_ARE_ALIVE (52) writes:
if you die you have no chance of seeing your son try to keep strong hopefully youll get ti see him soon

On Thursday November 17th, 2005, coly (59) writes:
i think its beutiful i didnt talk to my dad for like 17 yrs now i live with him so dont lose hope and i wish you luck

On Thursday November 17th, 2005, Lydia Jade (1105) writes:
"I'm not alive, nor I am dead Too many thoughts in my head" love that...this is very touching..a soft depth was reached here...i enjoyed it

On Monday November 21st, 2005, Esau (175) writes:
i'm all for quick and hasty problem solving. anyway, moving on.

On Wednesday November 23rd, 2005, BlackPunk (74) writes:
Is that ought to show blood?

On Thursday November 24th, 2005, Err0r (402) writes:
I'm both amused and horrified by this. :D Good job.

On Sunday November 27th, 2005, Xxbleeding_tearsxX (3) writes:
our world has rivers and rivers of blood that run all the time..with suicide, homicide, war..everything...someday..i believe our water will run red ~*~amelia~*~

On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, SmileEmptySoul (32) writes:
These are pretty good. I can mosty relate to the first one. ~Empty Soul~

On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, Simple Porcelain (6) writes:
I feel like you should be less blunt. I feel like I'm getting stabbed in the eye when I read this, and not in a good effective stylistic manner.

On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, gothicangel (11) writes:
I liked this poem too.

On Tuesday November 29th, 2005, Love Nothing (2) writes:
I liked this... I was deffinetly drawn in by the date... this day holds extra signifcance to me! but your poem was just... exactly EXACTLY how i feel somedays... excellent. ~Love Nothing~

On Wednesday November 30th, 2005, Tainted_Love (7) writes:
uhm yeah umm o my I have to go to the washroom now

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Tasya (2) writes:
I can see how this is a little vague, but that feature sucked me in, making me wait for the next line to drag me in deeper. ~T

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Aganaduyugodvayosd (64) writes:
Your imagination is untouchable, darth.

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Aganaduyugodvayosd (64) writes:
This is simply amazing. Bravo!

On Thursday December 1st, 2005, Aganaduyugodvayosd (64) writes:
Here's a salute from planet Earth, Commander Thompson. Luck be with you! ~JY

On Thursday December 8th, 2005, Err0r (434) writes:
Damn you Roachy. Write faster. It's worse than those little kids addictions to harry potter books. I can't wait for the next book. :(

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Wasteland (101) writes:
I agree with dave and the green thing look like a penis? ~Trev

On Saturday December 10th, 2005, Wasteland (101) writes:
Thats pretty cool ~Trev

On Sunday December 11th, 2005, Lydia Jade (1090) writes:
I like it...its very simple and the rhymes are simple and easy...makes me wanna give you a hug...we all know what its like to hurt...some more then others

On Sunday December 11th, 2005, Lydia Jade (1090) writes:
thats alot of comments

On Saturday December 17th, 2005, DustyStrawberry (67) writes:
Great works. Dusty~

On Thursday December 29th, 2005, sIo (992) writes:
i admit. that was highly entertaining.

On Friday December 30th, 2005, Mistress Shadow (209) writes:
Interesting list of opinions and way to be bold. ~T

On Saturday December 31st, 2005, damascus (29) writes:
*Mind wonders* the rhyme scheam was good but i didn't get the message


On Thursday January 5th, 2006, braindead_poet (664) writes:
this is hot, but with more than the sex appeal. The drive behind it, the force with which it arouses... your imagination was absolutely captivating; I was sucked right into the depth of this. well done ;) bdp

On Thursday January 5th, 2006, Rain In The Willows (1138) writes:
damn, Ian, that's kinda kinky...

On Thursday January 5th, 2006, Err0r (457) writes:
I wonder sometimes if you like wikipedia fetishes and just like have a hay day with 'em. Nontheless another flustering write. You crazy person.

On Friday January 6th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (232) writes:
Oh I see amanose .... Now I get it!

On Friday January 6th, 2006, elisa (1216) writes:
Mmm.....gotta love the teacher thats not afraid to sink his teeth deep into such a sensitive area in order to inspire his student and bring her to her peak potential........you definitely drilled this lesson home

On Friday January 6th, 2006, meltingpetal (10) writes:
this got me going and thinking of all the times i have had sex but it especially made me think of how good the first time was. thanks for the walk down memory lane

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, Crimson Shade (128) writes:
This is fucked up, the last line made me chuckle though... good write.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
ahaha.wooooooooow. fucked up. and i still liked it!

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, Lotophagi (598) writes:
this is awesome, and I can't believe that something I wrote lead to someone writing a poem like this that has so much truth and wisdom in it. this is wonderful advice. Thank you.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
yooouu arre tooo awwweesoommeee. sorry its like 3am and i feel like slurring my typing.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
god. this theme pops up quite a bit. haha. it was a good write.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
haha, hmm i see your like paint?

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
very nice

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
wow.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
wow.

On Saturday January 7th, 2006, AHHH (291) writes:
awesome. indeed

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, Err0r (465) writes:
ROFL. Door Number two. Amazing.

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, Mistress Shadow (213) writes:
So very true and well put. I think both genders are to blame when talking doesn't take place first. ~T

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, elisa (1222) writes:
in a moment shared such as this.....i felt the depths of someone......a naked love wrapped around an exposed soul.....the altar where i laid my heart.

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, braindead_poet (680) writes:
the utter honesty of this struck me in the heart. often times, though, even open communication fails somehow. i apologize.... intelligence has left me tonight. thank you. bdp

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, NikesRain (1100) writes:
great truths in this, ah if we could always remember these things, even when we become wrapped up in another....great work

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, Dying_Angel (114) writes:
if only everyone would take this advice and use it. wonderful.

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, Ainsof (81) writes:
this is great advice (though I am often unsure how I feel) and flawless in its style and rhyme.

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, darklightapparition (11) writes:
*moans* literary porn *uhhhh* damn that was arousing, your girlfriend is only lucky bitch(bitch in a good way)

On Sunday January 8th, 2006, AHHH (301) writes:
hahaha

On Monday January 9th, 2006, AHHH (306) writes:
it was good. great write.

On Monday January 9th, 2006, AHHH (306) writes:
did you repost this? because i STILLLLLL love it . haha. and im so willing. not really. bye.

On Monday January 9th, 2006, PoeticHellion (106) writes:
Wow. Well done. Well done indeed

On Monday January 9th, 2006, elisa (1233) writes:
'.....until they give in and their bodies release....'.....that line is pure magic......you press a firm finger against the pulse......and you are absolutely right......the satisfaction comes when waking in the others arms ......definitely a warm feeling.

On Monday January 9th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (244) writes:
Whew, thinkin I need a smoke now! (haha) Very passionate darth. Nice!

On Monday January 9th, 2006, vaultgrl (161) writes:
i like the idea...like being dead and still existing?....like when you look into eyes and see the hollowness behind....great write

On Monday January 9th, 2006, Moodswing (68) writes:
ahhh.....i see my sweet lil vel has inspired yet another lost soul...heheh...she is so deliciously wicked ..this looks good on ya

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, Dying_Angel (173) writes:
"i love it when they are willing" for some reason this stood out to me. it gives me a visual of someone just giving in.

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, AHHH (308) writes:
nice.

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, Dying_Angel (173) writes:
this is something to think about. i would hope that if i was in that position someone would set me free.

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, aldldl (175) writes:
this is one to make a person think. and i 'pose that in this it would be a female in this "bad spot" or a male to all the females, it tests your desires more...

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, aldldl (175) writes:
do i know what i would do? i am not sure, i want to think i would help out. But i might just walk on by... ~Adam

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, Shewolf (43) writes:
I would free you and let you be.....Great write. Shewolf

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, Lotophagi (601) writes:
well, my bloodlines suggest I have a few traces of viking in me, so I believe I would rape and plunder firstly.... then probably set you free before fucking you and finally letting you be ;). awesome write.

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, braindead_poet (682) writes:
very thought provoking. you being bound in chains, obviously there could be no person capable of setting you free considering there must be a lock holding the chains fast?... think it's possible you yourself have the key?

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, braindead_poet (682) writes:
"for it is only us as the individuals who can free ourselves from this prison that we as the individuals have created. through knowledge, enlightenment and the power of heart, we find the strength to move toward action."

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, elisa (1242) writes:
i would have to help them........like they say '....do unto others....'

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, NikesRain (1135) writes:
oh so you, definitely a 'wake up and listen a bit harder to make sure you heard right' feel and voice, and does make you think as Petty Tears said.

On Tuesday January 10th, 2006, Petty Tears (31) writes:
Interesting...i didnt find it erotic really but more of an intruiging situation that made me ponder what id do...prolly leave you alone beacuse its none of my buisness....nice write

On Wednesday January 11th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (271) writes:
I would "ask" you what you wanted me to do... but, I would hold the key on my tongue for you to find when I placed a kiss upon your lips! Hypothetically of course! ;) Great write. Julia~

On Thursday January 12th, 2006, ShadowyEvangel (668) writes:
this is definately an interesting piece...not too sure I like the rhyme scheme much, but over all, I am definately intrigued by this. *Evangel*

On Friday January 13th, 2006, Dying_Angel (206) writes:
i feel as if the rhyming was forced. its better to just put your thoughts down because you have so many amzing messages in this that are being held back because of the concentration on rhyming.

On Friday January 13th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (292) writes:
This is by far my favorite of yours! Awesome, flowing and just unique! Julia~

On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Agana (11) writes:
LOL! Funny shit!

On Friday January 13th, 2006, inruins (59) writes:
Um....um....um...*inruins strggles to find different keys* um....

On Friday January 13th, 2006, knightmirror (539) writes:
you hit it right on the head brother...this is nothing short of the truth which needs to be expressed like you have so beautifully and not disrespectfully have done....-knight

On Saturday January 14th, 2006, Agana (11) writes:
LOL! Funny shit!

On Saturday January 14th, 2006, leluna (16) writes:
absolutely awesome! i especially liked the mall segment, but drop the bomb is truth. you are immediately on my profiles!

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, dead_inside (54) writes:
wow...*cannot think of words to describe this*...good write

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, Crimson Shade (157) writes:
Fantastic write... not too crude or sensuous - a good balance.

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, DarkNephilim (8) writes:
...wow just wow... great wording

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, Circe (166) writes:
Wow, very lascivious! Scintillating read.

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, elisa (1264) writes:
Dear Penthouse, i wanna fuck my goddess into a whore........ ;)

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, knightmirror (540) writes:
*claps*....i like it....you should send it to penthouse letters....-knight

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, braindead_poet (678) writes:
A-men! outstanding testification to spiritual liberation. very emotionally charged and screaming in tones of the soul's octaves. well done, and thank you ;) bdp

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, vaultgrl (173) writes:
....wow....*bookmarks*...i really like this....it feels different from your other writes.....i love the feeling behind it, i can almost see your chains and invision them breaking.....great job conveying this....and wonderful imagery....."my spirits will f

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, vaultgrl (173) writes:
....."my spirits will fly, up into the sky, as long as i try".....and "i feel the heavens smile"....i love these lines, but in pointing them out feel i've taken due justice from all the other great lines/stanzas here...great write.....

On Sunday January 15th, 2006, Spyral (55) writes:
See.. I don't know why but i want to read more..

On Monday January 16th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (58) writes:
That had a good flow to it and it was full of emontion and it was beautifully written

On Monday January 16th, 2006, Dying_Angel (214) writes:
This does sound like a sng. Good flow.

On Monday January 16th, 2006, elisa (1269) writes:
this reminds me a lot of the song The End by The Doors........which is a huge compliment......i think the mind culminates a sense of finality......but i believe nothing comes to an end..

On Monday January 16th, 2006, Urban Shipwreck (1090) writes:
Yah pretty much.

On Monday January 16th, 2006, leluna (19) writes:
from old experience, this is absolute truth! funny thing is, any job turns into this in some facet. i vote equal opportunity hater!

On Monday January 16th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (58) writes:
That was spledidly beautiful and interesting

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (60) writes:
I loved it I agree with Kuro:{

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, Drifter (353) writes:
:nods to kuro's comment:

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, kuro bara (450) writes:
i dont wanna end up like that* and its an amazing write, very deep and heartfelt write..or so it seemed to me -Kel

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, kuro bara (450) writes:
thats..sad..im not ashamed to say that this has made me cry..its just so...idk..its just amazing, is what it is..im sorry...about that..and im one of those ppl, that hides everything inside and doesnt really share anything with anyone..and id ont wanna en

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, The_Demon (68) writes:
not solar flares!!!!!!! not that station!!!! NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (318) writes:
Never underestimate the power of negative thinking. Maybe you should try, I suck at being mean? ;) Otherwise this flowed nicely... and doesn't suck! Julia~

On Tuesday January 17th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (149) writes:
I like the flow and images of flying. Great write darth! Julia~

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, Forgotten_Heartbroke (1) writes:
I like this one. It's really good.

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, elisa (1265) writes:
......to be the best writer you can be..........but do you still intend on inflicting pain on those who care for you.......*cares for you*

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, leluna (20) writes:
oops, that was korny. still love the write

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, leluna (20) writes:
nice writing, we all fear of dieing alone in the end. i will try to find you my friend

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, windowXeyes (17) writes:
I love how this flows together....

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (67) writes:
wow.....*speechless*

On Wednesday January 18th, 2006, windowXeyes (17) writes:
Kinky, twisted and sick...But very well done...

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, kuro bara (454) writes:
i really like this...'lost in the rewind no one was kind so, im where no one can find' i truly like this! -Kel

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, AHHH (302) writes:
nice.

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (76) writes:
lol I loved it, sadly my mom's a smokerV.V

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, Dying_Angel (243) writes:
ugghh...i hate smokers...great write. i liked the rhyming a lot.

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, damascus (56) writes:
wow.... I am still confused..... so first weed, then roach boy, then just roach, then a sith roach, then a guy who smoked the origanal blunt. are you saying that every time you change your name your personality changes?????

On Thursday January 19th, 2006, shdwbxr_baby (7) writes:
I love this!!! It's beautiful. I'd also like to tell you that i was looking at your profile, and I saw you had a quote from Counting Crows, I think that they are the best band ever

On Friday January 20th, 2006, Crimson Shade (167) writes:
Thoughts like these plague me daily and you portray them perfectly - the two voices is an extra touch of class - i would like to hear this read.

On Friday January 20th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (331) writes:
I like the way you used two different voices.... Great job Johny! :)

On Friday January 20th, 2006, elisa (1267) writes:
if i weren't in the same frame of mind as this piece....maybe i could offer you some profound words of wisdom...but all i can say is you certainly know how to lay out the naked truth.....perhaps in lies the cure~elisa

On Friday January 20th, 2006, Asphalt_Memory (55) writes:
Our minds seem to be the last place we need to be. It traps us behind the images and lives we create but don't live. I have blamed the world for caging me, but it seems I have caged myself. This was great

On Friday January 20th, 2006, Asphalt_Memory (55) writes:
Wow, these people are touchy. You don't like soemthing and you jump all over it. I mean damn, it wasn't bad...it slightly reflects what really happened...~Memory

On Friday January 20th, 2006, Asphalt_Memory (55) writes:
*sigh* Lets hope the end of humanity isn't in this lifetime...its a horrible thing to think about.

On Friday January 20th, 2006, gothpoptart (1) writes:
oh boy...i like it!

On Friday January 20th, 2006, Asphalt_Memory (55) writes:
You sure his name isn't Todd? Damn...no wonder he won't answer...I 've been callin him the wrong name...shit-Memory

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, Crimson_Skies (4) writes:
-cringes- Good read all the same.

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, brokensole (6) writes:
my throat feels kind of dry now - beautiful.

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, dead_inside (62) writes:
so close to home... i only wish we didnt feel this, good write

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, paperflowers (257) writes:
the only person i can't stop lying to is myself and its killing me, literally, its an addiction/coping method/disease/affliction...whatever, its f*cked up...and there is truth in my lies, truth that i need, or i'd be gone. so sad...wishing you serenity

On Sunday January 22nd, 2006, wonderlandhysteria (2270) writes:
*sigh* ..I know this too well.

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, Crimson Shade (172) writes:
- onw word - STONED - ace write... loved the pictures... a touch of class.

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, windowXeyes (20) writes:
Now I get it....

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, Anoblechicken (21) writes:
How high did you have to be to write this?? anyways it's funny and all but yeah i am wondering are you going to make a chronical or roachy? haha

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, darklightapparition (61) writes:
great story, very captivating, my name isn't that interesting, good job

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, The_Demon (73) writes:
ummmmm..........

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, PhilosophyOfHate (166) writes:
Wt... h....

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, damascus (63) writes:
can I smoke it?

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, intellctualViolence (17) writes:
i dont see the face is something wrong with me

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, TaintedButterfly (343) writes:
I see a face also... Nice!

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, darklightapparition (61) writes:
*skips by with a lollipop*

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, vaultgrl (182) writes:
hehehe....spiffy......*jumps in puddle*......ok, but thats weird cause i can see a face in it.....or maybe i'm just weird.....

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, ABloodySuicide (210) writes:
Good job on this write..Very awsome

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, Lucklost (1) writes:
this stuff is addicting....sick arousing but addicting

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, ABloodySuicide (210) writes:
Wow they are all very good...good job

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, Ozymandias726 (57) writes:
Wow, I didnt get to read all of these, cause I should be doing my homework. But I especially liked "My Own Prison". You have a lot of great writes, I'll be sure to look at the rest

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, AHHH (314) writes:
"Don't you dare cry Cause you won't miss me." thats how i feel, great job.

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, ABloodySuicide (210) writes:
This is very touching and a very god write good job

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, AHHH (314) writes:
nice.

On Monday January 23rd, 2006, ABloodySuicide (210) writes:
Twisted...Very cool

On Tuesday January 24th, 2006, veingo (501) writes:
I read these both, and could see them playing out like movie shorts. It kinda reminds me of an old work of mine, but I like yours better. ^V^

On Sunday January 29th, 2006, dead_inside (63) writes:
such a well written piece, such a shame you feel like this...you do matter to people.

On Monday January 30th, 2006, tinaheater (16) writes:
hey you know what i like this one email me and say what your name is.to please email me.

On Monday January 30th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (395) writes:
Tragic but very good piece Johny. Hope all is well... *hugs*

On Monday January 30th, 2006, Mistress Shadow (220) writes:
*snuggles closer into roachy*. This piece seems raw to me though. ~T

On Monday January 30th, 2006, desekr8or (24) writes:
Fucking weirdo! We should hang out sometime.

On Monday January 30th, 2006, tinaheater (16) writes:
hey i like this one

On Monday January 30th, 2006, tinaheater (16) writes:
what is this supposed to mean

On Monday January 30th, 2006, tinaheater (16) writes:
i dont get this image will you email at this email and tell me what it means heart_breaker_2hot4u@yahoo.com

On Monday January 30th, 2006, tinaheater (16) writes:
ok kool

On Wednesday February 1st, 2006, scorpiobetrayed (61) writes:
id matter to me if you were gone...in more ways then one ;P but seriosly i really hope things get better for ya soon and this is a great peice and ya know im around if ya need to talk

On Thursday February 2nd, 2006, Kacey (466) writes:
i agree fully w/ Crimson...truly amazing work..good luck w/ the contest -Kel

On Friday February 3rd, 2006, darklightapparition (86) writes:
very good like it, i am going to read the next part now

On Friday February 3rd, 2006, darklightapparition (86) writes:
damn it!!! what happens next? very good though, i would pay to read something like this

On Sunday February 5th, 2006, darklightapparition (96) writes:
awww, this is so cute and romantic and everything else that makes girls go all mushy and teary....very good write

On Sunday February 5th, 2006, wonderlandhysteria (2256) writes:
Damn..You're quite the romantic. This is so delightful. Soft and unfolding beauty expressed here.. I can't stop smiling. It's just so pretty.

On Sunday February 5th, 2006, Kacey (471) writes:
this..is about love! aww its cute..and its really good...the moonlight..and beach...*swoons* *grins* anyway..good write :) Kel

On Sunday February 5th, 2006, Kacey (471) writes:
lots of poems..but..i've felt the same way..about a guy..over the years..you've described all my feelings exactly..love can be a wonderful thing, cant it? great poems :) -Kel

On Monday February 6th, 2006, Guillotine (56) writes:
i dont normally read long poems but i cant say this one wasnt worth it. good work on keeping me enthralled.

On Monday February 6th, 2006, Kacey (472) writes:
it is really sweet...one of the sweetest things i've ever read..and i hope you dont mind if i make it a fav... i ♥ ya muchly :) -Kel

On Monday February 6th, 2006, windowXeyes (54) writes:
awww....this is beautiful. Wonderfully written!

On Monday February 6th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (100) writes:
wow it blew me away it was beautiful

On Monday February 6th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (432) writes:
awwww that was so tender, sweet & adorable. Beautiful write Johny.

On Monday February 6th, 2006, Lucklost (74) writes:
that is so sweet..i loved it

On Thursday February 9th, 2006, vaultgrl (201) writes:
this is so beautiful.....and i has such a good message.....great write...

On Thursday February 9th, 2006, ApathysKiss (614) writes:
emo?

On Friday February 10th, 2006, vaultgrl (204) writes:
.....holy crapola!....this is great.....and happens so much....great job in writing the two differing views, and i realy liked the flow......great write!

On Friday February 10th, 2006, darklightapparition (106) writes:
damn! very....., just very good one!!!

On Friday February 10th, 2006, Mistress Shadow (228) writes:
This is well thought out. It's sad that some women create this mentality but they do. ~T

On Friday February 10th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (123) writes:
o.O wow.......

On Saturday February 11th, 2006, TaintedButterfly (488) writes:
Great job Johny dear! I loved it. Shows once again how different men & women truly are. *kudos* Julia~

On Saturday February 11th, 2006, Kacey (473) writes:
like vault said..it does happen alot..and you did do an excellent job in both views, thats what i would have been saying, about the boy if i was in that situation..you fit into a mind so perfectly, no matter who/what it is..excellent job! -Kel

On Sunday February 12th, 2006, Dying_Angel (355) writes:
awww...thats so freakin sweet. seriously, id die to have someone care for me this much...

On Monday February 13th, 2006, glass doll (1015) writes:
lovely tribute to a beautiful person. this actually brought tears to my eyes, especially the end..to be so cared for, as this is truly a beautiful thing. and you have a heart of gold and a gorgeous soul, it's apparent.

On Monday February 13th, 2006, ABloodySuicide (219) writes:
This is a very heartfelt piece..This is beautiful..Cery good job on it..I like it....~J

On Monday February 13th, 2006, Kacey (474) writes:
i am smiling..and your the only thought thats been keeping me from being upset this whole day...its so..adorable..*blushes at bethanys comment* alli can say is.. ♥♥ :) -Kel

On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, Kacey (475) writes:
happy valentines day to you too...this is just..amazing..its almost like 'who is she? she must be wonderful' but then..i realize its me..and im stunned..i love this..and i love you... :) -Kel

On Tuesday February 14th, 2006, Nightlysinangel (127) writes:
It flows with love and beauty..I love it it's beautifully written

On Wednesday February 15th, 2006, PhilosophyOfHate (170) writes:
I remember you sending me this.... Not my style but it's very well written. I give you 400 thumbs up! -*Philla*-

On Wednesday April 26th, 2006, CrumbledRosePetals (488) writes:
Now this is what i call sexy and kinky.. i would do that in a heart beat.. i loved it

On Tuesday May 2nd, 2006, Dancing_Monkey (1219) writes:
Looks like a lair of flesh. and still a river of blood. it's frantic


On Thursday July 6th, 2006, Shatterdtearsangl (3) writes:
i put yur story on my ipod nano! lolz! it makes me laugh and grin


On Saturday August 5th, 2006, the dried flower (59) writes:
desekr8or, lol, that was a funny comment, it made me laugh. this poem may seem a little morbid and disterbing, but i understood it. it made me feel like i was in the head of some one, a killer(or a free-er).....good write.


On Monday September 4th, 2006, Mistress Shadow (264) writes:
I miss you and I hope all your battles turn out in your favour. I could tell you how charming and romantic this is, but I'm sure you already know. Alas, till next spring... ~T