[{Du Bist Schon}]
By BeautifulCalamity
Crashing through dreary notes of hope,
long gone..
and cellophane smiles that melt away
in truth, that were never really there.
Curtains thrown open, and covers torn down.
{Pushed Aside}
And I measure.
Numbers are ageless (and days..long)
Our season of kisses,
seems to linger on my sight.
{sea salt}
Sighing, Breathing ..
of Recollections,
Memories Vivid and
Sharp.. Your Face
Speaks To Me of
Saints
Colossal, you .. push my breath,
under a dark note of rhymes.
The flavors of your depth intoxicate me,
I stumble.. perhaps knowingly...
I searched for another drunken moment of relapse
(going back, where I always was)
I Never Fell
the sky is pale,
as P A L E as your
eyes
......
(O)(C)(E)(A)(N)
......
They breathe in.. out of relief,
Taking me into the unknown corners of circles.
We danced past verbs and actions felt,
alike...
In a dimlit ballroom,
words fell around us, and I smiled
(untrue purity)
I'm trembling with your golden heart in my hands..
Cracked glass stars weave through
our limbs, and finally we are at a moment of
drought
forever?
forever?
Still shaking, I step..
I hope,
------
We
Love
------
Slaves to orange lampshades and
the heat of my mirrors.
(reflecting off of our hearts, endlessly)
forever?
forever?
I will trust your music,
the sound of my mind.
Trip me lover, Let me breathe you in..
Straight from your spine.
To the chandeliers dripping from
your lips..like jewels beheaded..
(enticing)
Lanterns guide me to love you,
I dont believe I never wanted to.
Spanish Sonnets And Broken Pillars,
Your cigarette stenched kisses
in the summer heat..
Left me craving,
Awaiting the next
knock at my window..
Lover Lost At Sea,
Lover Reclaimed His Truth To Me
.....
Du Bist Schon
(you are beautiful)
Comments on "[{Du Bist Schon}]"
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, blue
(1409) wrote:
"I stumble..perhaps knowingly..." this line grabbed my attention...hmm. Calamity, this another beautiful piece. A+
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On Thursday, November 25, 2004, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
*sigh* you did it again! I love u :) Why are you so damn good :)
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A former member wrote:
Damn, you are so creative. This, this is good. That you for being a poet!~Sarah
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A former member wrote:
"Spanish Sonnets And Broken Pillars,
Your cigarette stenched kisses in the summer heat.. Left me craving,
Awaiting the next knock at my window..". Beautiful, so graceful. I could almost dance to it. Unique with draining colours and sprouting rainbows.
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
This has such a beautiful, classic feeling to it.. it was like an old italian film playing out.. some lovely lines, "Spanish Sonnets And Broken Pillars, Your cigarette stenched kisses in the summer heat". Stunning, you've got such a unique talent.
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, K_Love
(525) wrote:
From beginning to end very beautiful and well spoken, unique style. Very lovely.
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
this was flawless... one of the best i have read from you... elegant and eloquent...
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
sehr gut. ich liebe es. A_C
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
so utterly impressive,as i expect from u now,perfectly written,graceful and a joy to read with a lot of stand out moments
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On Thursday, November 4, 2004, Lord Kalgalath
(182) wrote:
very Nice.