Rain

By Sex Slave

Come and wash me clean

And purify my soul

Kill me in your fury

Kill me in your glory

Release me from my prison

Set me free and save my soul

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Copyright 2004 Danielle Heyboer
Published on Friday, October 29, 2004.     Filed under: "Spiritual" and "Poetry"
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  • Savannah On Monday, November 22, 2004, Savannah (218)By person wrote:

    I have been reading your work and I have to say, it's damn good

  • hate_doll On Thursday, November 18, 2004, hate_doll (263)By person wrote:

    mm...yes, spiritual in an uplifting sense...finally...but without being flighty and alienating...I liked the 'kill me in your fury' line, too :)

  • Lord Kalgalath On Wednesday, November 17, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    majestic spirituality, the way christianity used to be.

  • Malice In Wonderland On Tuesday, November 2, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    Very spiritual in a sense... Kya Scholar

  • whisperer On Friday, October 29, 2004, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    majestic is the word for this one...-]darkness[-

  • A former member wrote: I agree with darkness...it's majestic. "..Kill me in your glory..."

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