Here I Find You [Cities We'd Never Know]
By BeautifulCalamity
Your metallic taste,
underneath my fingers..
You still linger in my
mouth..
Acid, Slow soaked..of the vengeance,
a tragic rebirth.
A Broken Heart attaches itself to my hope,
When I Move to fly, I find sleep unbearable.
Burning the thread black,
Trust stripped and stinking of perversion.
You are not the Romantic I bore..
through IV dreams and butterflies wings.
I wish I'd Crumble as a weightless,
wasteless..
bleached-white movement
of dirt
.........
And the chains play on,
of
sonatas and verbs..
(Rusted) They Are Rust Now..
Your Lust deserts me,
My Love leaves you.
the candlelit kisses
are endless,
the flame is that of
blinking lights..
" I Feel As Cold As A Razorblade"
truth, here in your stare..
I sense watching.
Colder than a bitter winter,
of Blizzards..
screaming stars
say
murder..
Paris soothes me now,
as we unravel our naked bodies
from these sheets..
(twisted and unforgiving)
the bright lights help me breathe,
and Realize..
With every word, you melt my whispers away..
Awards
Comments on "Here I Find You [Cities We'd Never Know]"
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On Monday, December 19, 2005, Jaded Jezzabelle
(328) wrote:
I like this alot...great visual....
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On Monday, December 19, 2005, LordBrosnian
(44) wrote:
Very good...deep...dirty and dark, while pervading such beatitude...I usually hate this writing...you pull it off, girl.
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On Monday, January 3, 2005, Rone4611
(121) wrote:
kind of an giant industrial sort of feeling... giant and sad... not sure... it was beautiful, nevertheless =)
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
*distored in some way...
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
*butterflies wings.I wish i'd crumble as a weightless wasteless..bleached-white movement of dirt'...this is just wonderful,another admirable piece of work...this seems to scream something to me..somethingt that...I can't quite make out...as though..distor
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On Sunday, November 28, 2004, Railway_Butterfly
(353) wrote:
It was the title,that made me read this..and I'm glad I did...I love the whole first stanza..'Your metallic taste underneth my fingers..a broken heart attaches itself to my hope,when i move to fly I find sleep unbearable...through IV dreams and butterflie
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
absolutely beautiful.. a really passionate write! you chilled me with your words!
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On Wednesday, October 13, 2004, Loserland
(113) wrote:
very descriptive..."Trust stipped and stinking of perversion"...well put.
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A former member wrote:
the things wreaks of regret but it seems slightly detatched at the same timekinda like a person in shock screaming thoughts without realizing they are there own..
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On Thursday, October 7, 2004, Graveyard_Desciple
(39) wrote:
this was a fascinating piece and truly more than a joy to read!
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On Thursday, October 7, 2004, Alacer_Cogitatus
(140) wrote:
wonderful job bc. keep em comin. A_C
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On Wednesday, October 6, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
"You are not the romantic i bore..." Murder...IV dreams...Bleached white movement...listening to the chains...Sad when things die...
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
"through IV dreams and butterflies wings" this has to be my favorite line by far, the whole poem kept my attention and was very good....>Raven
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Amanda Parnell
(57) wrote:
dude... you soooo better get your account upgraded. *queenie*
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A former member wrote:
Flittering through my head, paper-thin veined masterpiece..."through IV dreams and butterfly wings"...how many times have I tried to capture that in so many failed words. I will treasure this.
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Belle
(17) wrote:
love it.
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A former member wrote:
....you just melt my whispers away with every word.
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On Tuesday, October 5, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
*blinks* breathtaking, and visual. Not only creating images clear as those bright lights...but emotions as well. beautifully written *~seraph~*