The Gleam Of Insects

By BeautifulCalamity

Glowing mouths of lightbugs...
fall of sight,
and time..
seeing the world as an
eclipse..
(fully tongued with sharp teeth)
Scratch at the walls,
Scratched At The Walls..
walls of bronze,
wilted spoons and silver flowers..
glisten in the sun.
(moonlight, midnight)
Redemption,
Oh purify..(cleanse...cleanse)
Lean in to me, and Smile of Sane.
Love in the remembrance of what used to be..
oh white light,
you fill my dazed skies..
you fill me with lilies,
and rocks of glitter.
to sink me beautifully..
when i flow with the (rhythm) of your
heartbeat..
slowing..slowed...slow..

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Published on Saturday, October 2, 2004. Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"

Comments on "The Gleam Of Insects"

On Thursday, October 4, 2007, Rone4611 (121) wrote:

=)
A former member wrote: I agree with Rone, very intoxicating. This had a very soothing feel to it, excellent work:) ~Ryan
On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Rone4611 (121) wrote:

intoxicatingly pretty, with just a touch of mystery and an awesome ending. Beautiful.
On Monday, October 4, 2004, DoctorAsh (371) wrote:

Hmm, i love this style you've developed into here - It has an upperlevel of intelligence behind it. Tricking the reader around direct feeling - leaving it slightly mysterious . Wonderful expression. [D&A]
On Sunday, October 3, 2004, FallenFaith (44) wrote:

Do i smell,(sniff,sniff) talent?
A former member wrote: Ooh. The flow of this sucked me up and placed me in it.. "and rocks of glitter. to sink me beautifully.." Awesome work, sweets.
On Sunday, October 3, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

Gorgeous, a breath takingly unique angle to write from. this really is perfect.. very lulling indeed. awesome work hon.
On Saturday, October 2, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

this is gorgeous; the cadence compelling and gentle and utterly original. loved the feel of this from beginning to end. beautiful write! :)
A former member wrote: you have a beautiful facination to your writing....loved reading this and will most likely read more..thanx ~UC~
On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Anth (1126) wrote:

really enjoyed this write,uniqueky fascinating,some lines really standing out
A former member wrote: hmm.. i cant find words to comment on this, its on the tip of my tongue.. interesting piece, though!
A former member wrote: nice wordings.
On Saturday, October 2, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428) wrote:

thank you old, and i'll be reading your lovely stuff as well..
On Saturday, October 2, 2004, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

you're welcome.. and take your time.. they're not going anywhere :)
On Saturday, October 2, 2004, OLd SouL (717) wrote:

as June says... a unique read. And very much lulling.. soothing. I haven't had a chance to tell you yet... Welcome to DP. I'll be reading more of you. :::OLd
A former member wrote: Lulling, somehow...a brilliant write; I've never read anything like this...
On Saturday, October 2, 2004, Zhee (529) wrote:

i really liked this.. wonderfully written.