Stars Into Crevices
By BeautifulCalamity
Shifting with the ground,
(dazed and dancing on tabletops)..
My season is of perception,
what you see.. I see..
Broken glass, reflecting me..
And I reached for that reckoning to
prove something
to myself..
I look into a vague presence
(Eye) see blades falling in front of my face,
it is my gold , it is my glow, it is my gold.. now.
Brought upon myself, it is now dug deep into the candlewax...
my Skin (saved and mindless)
Patches of pearl
and glassy eyes
illuminate my
face...
making the glare
Des ti ned to Reign..
(I am who Eye am, No one look at me)
"Think For Me, Love : When You're Kissing Someone, Think About Who You
Should Really Be Kissing"
.. Eye tried to open myself..
softly , eye kissed your I's..
and led you to see,
that change wasnt just a song with an
always ending
melody,
(white pills in the wine cellar)
Liquids pour from every man's hand, to create
another
(p)(l)(a)(c)(e)..
to build..
and abandon,
or destroy.
(Empires Crumble At Your Feet, I Praise You (Eye) Praise You)
Now, (NOW)
Liquids shift and collaborate,
prisms covered and redefined..
all through the concept of time.
soft peach lips yearning for you to
kiss me..
(eye..eye..eye..I want you)
And Blue Eyes,
(oh, blue eyes)..
captivate even the simplest soul...
giving birth to a flame that consumes us..
Looking around..
(pace..pace..pace)
We Find Beauty In The Furthest Places
From
Here..
SPACE,
Look Around.. We Are There..
(Look Around .. We Are THERE)
[Look Around..We Are THERE (there we'll stay)]
Comments on "Stars Into Crevices"
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On Wednesday, October 13, 2004, SluG
(35) wrote:
excellentio, loved it!
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A former member wrote:
- Think About Who You Should Really Be Kissing"
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A former member wrote:
I am utterly impressed. This is the pure essence of beauty. Through this I feel your heart and soul . . and see a glimpse of your eyes . . *smiles* - magnificent. ~*~ Rose ~*~ p.s this line clawed me: "Think For Me, Love : When You're Kissing Someone, Thi
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A former member wrote:
it brings a lot of thoughts into mind. a range of thoughts.
i like it.
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
what can i say? hell i don't even know. great work. i'm going with what solace said and whatever he might have left out. i'm unsure of what else to say!
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On Monday, October 4, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
I left something out?
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, mysticventures
(527) wrote:
real cute - real good write as well - welcome!
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
i agree with everything solace said, and then some
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Reminds me of being drunk and then realising that your in love and being in a kind of lulled out sense of wonder/desire...I'm glad I came, this was like diamonds, sharp and hard, but pretty as a jewel...
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Kiss me, but dont hurt me...the flames that consume are beauty in and of itself but it is ugly also, fire is both warmth and destruction entwined...use it wisely, use it sparingly...The simplest soul is the wisest...
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
Blue eyes of the sea of the crashing waves of so much that it hurts like being struck in the face but its emotional, self referentials mean nothing bar the intentions behind. Look around but dont stare at the cracks and the crevices...focus focus focus
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
this is hypnotic in its presentation; many rich internal images... i really enjoyed this. lovely write! :)
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Solace
(1065) wrote:
"You cannot prove your love any more than you can a shadow" " The proof is in the pudding..." White pills, human empires built on desire, built on trust, built on nothing at all like babylonian annihilations...
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A former member wrote:
Tranquil beauty & wisdom surround your words....and a pure soul. Excellent.