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Hearts , Broken
By BeautifulCalamity
Space, You Saw Those Stars...
They Lit Up Your Eyes,
Your Face... Your Smile.
Hair Like Gold,
Spun Out Of Silk...
Your Form, Perfectly Matches To Mine (IN)
To Theirs...
Were You As Much To Them As To Me?
Time Talks (now,now)..
It Speaks Of
Rusted Verbs
And
Crushed Hopes..
Collapsing Over Your Drinks,
Through Your Poisons..
Drugged, And Your Crown..
Glistens Like The Halo Of A
Reborn..
From A Distance, I See The Shine..
The Glitter In The Center
Of Your
Eyes..
Up Close, I See Empty..
I Feel Hollow In Your Sight..
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Copyright 2004 BeautifulCalamity
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A former member wrote:
had to read it twice i was amazed by it ty for ur words
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On Thursday, December 16, 2004, Silent Assassin
(108)
wrote:
Damn, that is scary. That sounds just like me. I know how it feels. It sucks. Very well written.
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A former member wrote:
short and to the point, every line is eloquent and I can relate...Time speaks of rusted verbs and crushed hopes...amazing. great job
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A former member wrote:
whoa. now this is really something, all the words and lines are well strung, the imagery i got from this was... surreal. yet oh so real.
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A former member wrote:
the sweetness spoken by your lips,the essence spread by your breath, and yet even the sadness tucked in your eyes are well reflected in this poem.. beautiful just as you are this poem is.
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On Thursday, September 30, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
so many lines in here i'd love to quote but i dont dare
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Poisons, laudinum's, opiates of the flesh, of the heart...Inadequacy seeths...
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On Monday, September 27, 2004, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
i read through this so quickly, just devouring it, then read it again...and again...I never get full...
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A former member wrote:
"I feel hollow in your sight"....absolutely stunning conclusion, wonderful piece.
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On Friday, September 24, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
"The Glitter In The Center Of Your Eyes.." absolutely divine... although I believe it would be easier on the eyes, without the caps. Nontheless, this is truly beautiful, and delicate. very nice work.
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On Tuesday, September 21, 2004, Lemons
(46) wrote:
I Think I Would Like This More If You Didn't Abuse your capitialazation ... in other reguards it was very good. :)
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