After-hours

By hate_doll

Tracing over
Nothing images
Saddened by how
Unalike they look
I try to be cliche
Say "wait for tomorrow,
It'll be better"
But cliche never
Worked for us
Neither did tomorrow

...whytt*04

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Copyright 2004 hate_doll
Published on Monday, August 23, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Monday, January 11, 2010, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    awesome and understood..-l-

  • maggot death On Monday, January 11, 2010, maggot death (62)By person wrote:

    I feel your pain. Simply amazing..... Thank you for devoting your time to make this work ---Maggot

  • Bella Butchery On Friday, February 16, 2007, Bella Butchery (724)By person wrote:

    ....powerfull...i remember feeling this way... very, very good

  • Loserland On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    well put....last three lines really hook you

  • Blood of Winter On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    This does bring things to the surface...memories of times past but not forgotten...the cliches seem to never work; do they.

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