After-hours

By hate_doll

Tracing over
Nothing images
Saddened by how
Unalike they look
I try to be cliche
Say "wait for tomorrow,
It'll be better"
But cliche never
Worked for us
Neither did tomorrow

...whytt*04

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Published on Monday, August 23, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Awards

January 11th, 2010

Comments on "After-hours"

On Monday, January 11, 2010, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

awesome and understood..-l-
On Monday, January 11, 2010, maggot death (60) wrote:

I feel your pain. Simply amazing..... Thank you for devoting your time to make this work ---Maggot
On Friday, February 16, 2007, Bella Butchery (696) wrote:

....powerfull...i remember feeling this way... very, very good
On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Loserland (113) wrote:

well put....last three lines really hook you
On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Blood of Winter (296) wrote:

This does bring things to the surface...memories of times past but not forgotten...the cliches seem to never work; do they.