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Raven Raven
By Dommi
*I had posted this on my old name, But this tribute will have to do until
I write a brand new sparkly one*
Raven raven, fly away
Save me before I decay
Before I let me bleed to death
And let him suck up my last breath
I close my eyes, run for my life
I feel my spirit taking flight
I lose myself and just let go
And soar away from the life I know
All wounds close, I'm finally free
The chains and holds vanish from me
My savior with obsidian wings
His words call me, beckoning
They welcome me to somewhere new
Where each new write adds to the view
Too beautiful to comprehend
All the phrases from his pen
Raven Raven, fly to me
and make the dark world cease to be
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Copyright 2004 Dommi Of Baphomet
Published on Wednesday, August 4, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, April 24, 2011, Poe Etiquette
(124)
wrote:
i loved this. very reminiscent of poe. i wrote one called sparrow sparrow as a tribute to blake. i like poe better though. nice tone to it. thank you
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On Tuesday, May 25, 2010, Riven Waker
(323) wrote:
hypnotic rhyme - powerful language - thank you for this brilliant piece
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On Saturday, February 25, 2006, xserratedsoulx
(212) wrote:
love it love it love it! do you have more stuff under your old name? if you do, you should let me read it! =) ~lauren~
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