Some Other God

By mysticventures

Some pray to the god of earthly delights
and overindulgences
I'll pray to some other god

While others pray to the god of vengenance,
retribution and fear
I'll pray to some other god

Still others pray to the god of credit cards,
debts and bills
I'll pray to some other god

As those pray to the god of the dead
and distant past
I'll pray to some other god

And as some pray to the god of the selfish
sensual man
I'll pray to some other god

Even as those pray to the god in that far off
distant place
I'll pray to some other god

And for those who pray to the god who is pledged
to return someday
I'll pray to some other god -

And I'll pray for those who pray astray

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Published on Monday, August 2, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

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Comments on "Some Other God"

On Wednesday, December 29, 2010, happilydepressed (400) wrote:

I have other gods 2 they rise and fall all the time
On Friday, May 1, 2009, ALBATROSS (194) wrote:

I love this. Seems as if you and I share some of the same inspiration. I really enjoyed this and your style in general! Nice job.
On Sunday, September 19, 2004, Six-Out (1423) wrote:

Mm, tasty. I can understand this one, because I live with them. The random gods of complacency and getting by. Some people never learn. Nice work here...it made me think of the book "Survivor". *nod*
On Thursday, September 9, 2004, lordshadow (153) wrote:

I... um... that was... wow. That was amazing.
On Wednesday, September 8, 2004, Dayer (162) wrote:

Perfect flow, I loved this, in fact, I have to fave this. Grat job :)
On Thursday, August 19, 2004, DarkWolf (415) wrote:

I love that last line. So many gods.. so many gods... -Michael
On Tuesday, August 3, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

this almost had an evangelical feel to it...a very nice flow, too...-l-
On Monday, August 2, 2004, MercyRain (105) wrote:

i did enjoy this... a nice change from the born-again's that like to hound me, lol... but perhaps this is for me, too...
On Monday, August 2, 2004, MercyRain (105) wrote:

i no longer see the wisdom in denying the shadow aspects of a god either... i pray to all of the above and then some
On Monday, August 2, 2004, mysticventures (527) wrote:

thanks for you words manywalks - I post my works for others to contemplate and possibly to enjoy - if not...
On Monday, August 2, 2004, manywalks (747) wrote:

Ahhh, this flowed with simple perfection through my soul. I can almost hear the rips and tears this may cause some others;, but ittasted just right to me. ~ wen