emancipation
By missanthropic
who among you is capable of lifting
the heaviness from this heart?
even if you posses the strength
of a thousand men,
nay, ten thousand - -
there is no measure of muscle
nor force, that can deconstruct
the spectre that guards my core -
without fracturing it's delicate shell
let us walk a more cerebral path -
flanked on both sides by logic,
as though Socrates' reason held sway over affection,
perhaps with cunning intelligence this might
for a short spell confuse my purpose
but in due time,
with proper analysis
she who knows herself to be a fool
escapes that treacherous labyrinth
there is no sum, nor prayer,
to untangle these bemused ventricles
i breathe and drink and feed
within the secure confines of detachment- -
a slave to its constitution
beware - for once offended,
the delicate heart
is not so easily amended
Comments on "emancipation"
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On Thursday, July 15, 2004, Mr King
(547) wrote:
i see... free the heart trapped in the mind... but beware the hearts of others in your quest to be free... it is a humble and noble soul indeed that touches and yet does not trample...
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On Monday, June 28, 2004, Recycled
(93) wrote:
You put us to shame.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2004, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
Outstanding wording and pace to this. A very commanding flow to it. Great job.
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A former member wrote:
exceptional use of words.
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On Sunday, June 27, 2004, Anth
(1126) wrote:
excellent work,the idea and descriptions so strong,i love the second verse,impressive