emancipation

By missanthropic

who among you is capable of lifting
the heaviness from this heart?
even if you posses the strength
of a thousand men,
nay, ten thousand - -
there is no measure of muscle
nor force, that can deconstruct
the spectre that guards my core -
without fracturing it's delicate shell

let us walk a more cerebral path -
flanked on both sides by logic,
as though Socrates' reason held sway over affection,
perhaps with cunning intelligence this might
for a short spell confuse my purpose
but in due time,
with proper analysis
she who knows herself to be a fool
escapes that treacherous labyrinth

there is no sum, nor prayer,
to untangle these bemused ventricles
i breathe and drink and feed
within the secure confines of detachment- -
a slave to its constitution
beware - for once offended,
the delicate heart
is not so easily amended

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Copyright 2004 missanthropic
Published on Sunday, June 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Mr King On Thursday, July 15, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    i see... free the heart trapped in the mind... but beware the hearts of others in your quest to be free... it is a humble and noble soul indeed that touches and yet does not trample...

  • Recycled On Monday, June 28, 2004, Recycled (93)By person wrote:

    You put us to shame.

  • NikesRain On Sunday, June 27, 2004, NikesRain (1240)By person wrote:

    Outstanding wording and pace to this. A very commanding flow to it. Great job.

  • A former member wrote: exceptional use of words.

  • Anth On Sunday, June 27, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    excellent work,the idea and descriptions so strong,i love the second verse,impressive

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