Sometimes I Try
By Krusifire
Sometimes I try.
But the truth gets lost.
Between the emptiness.
And the lies.
Like a burning angel.
Dancing in the rain.
Like your own reflection.
Stareing back in the windowpane.
What if I said that I.
Was already dead inside.
And my only friend.
Was the night.
Would you still be mine?
Till the end of time?
I lose myself inside.
Sometimes.
Like a lonely flag.
Blowing in the breeze.
Like a hardened soldier.
Brought down to his knees.
Whatever we've become.
Whatever we've became.
Shines in the sun.
But noone can ever.
Reach the flames.
What if I said that I.
Was already dead inside.
And my only friend.
Was the night.
Would you still be mine?
Till the end of time?
I lose it deep inside.
Sometimes we face the nights.
And let the days just slip away.
Sometimes we want to know exactly.
What it is they'll say.
When we die.
Sometimes I try.
But the truth gets lost.
Between the emptiness.
And the lies.
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Comments on "Sometimes I Try"
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A former member wrote:
very relatable and I love the repetition.
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A former member wrote:
it has a lot of emotion in it.
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2012, ebonyshroud
(9) wrote:
I was just kinda feeling this way so ya i guess it helped a bit and i must say the repition is very well done
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On Wednesday, September 5, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Beautiful .. hello there. congrats on POD.. well deserved;
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A former member wrote:
Evocative work. I understand the feeling oh so perfectly.
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On Friday, August 20, 2004, missanthropic
(26) wrote:
utterly fantastic! and it will always be so...not sometimes, always.
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On Thursday, August 12, 2004, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
honesty laced with despair.........i know this drug................well spoken...................urban
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A former member wrote:
This rocks!! I like the way its layed out and how smooth it is to read.