Sometimes I Try

By Krusifire

Sometimes I try.
But the truth gets lost.
Between the emptiness.
And the lies.
Like a burning angel.
Dancing in the rain.
Like your own reflection.
Stareing back in the windowpane.
What if I said that I.
Was already dead inside.
And my only friend.
Was the night.
Would you still be mine?
Till the end of time?
I lose myself inside.
Sometimes.
Like a lonely flag.
Blowing in the breeze.
Like a hardened soldier.
Brought down to his knees.
Whatever we've become.
Whatever we've became.
Shines in the sun.
But noone can ever.
Reach the flames.
What if I said that I.
Was already dead inside.
And my only friend.
Was the night.
Would you still be mine?
Till the end of time?
I lose it deep inside.
Sometimes we face the nights.
And let the days just slip away.
Sometimes we want to know exactly.
What it is they'll say.
When we die.
Sometimes I try.
But the truth gets lost.
Between the emptiness.
And the lies.

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Copyright 2004 Krusifire
Published on Friday, May 21, 2004.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • A former member wrote: very relatable and I love the repetition.

  • A former member wrote: it has a lot of emotion in it.

  • ebonyshroud On Wednesday, September 5, 2012, ebonyshroud (9)By person wrote:

    I was just kinda feeling this way so ya i guess it helped a bit and i must say the repition is very well done

  • Devilish On Wednesday, September 5, 2012, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    Beautiful .. hello there. congrats on POD.. well deserved; Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Evocative work. I understand the feeling oh so perfectly. Scholar

  • missanthropic On Friday, August 20, 2004, missanthropic (26)By person wrote:

    utterly fantastic! and it will always be so...not sometimes, always.

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, August 12, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    honesty laced with despair.........i know this drug................well spoken...................urban

  • A former member wrote: This rocks!! I like the way its layed out and how smooth it is to read.

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