Time

By mysticventures

What is time -

Except the passing of one present into another

That we are conscious of this passing -

Is what separates us from all other creatures

It is our blessing -

And our curse

A blessing in that, with this awareness -

We are given control over our destiny

A curse in that, with this awareness -

In our attempt to manage time,

So focused on the future are we,

That we fail to see the present for what it is

For truely it is -

Our place

In time

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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Saturday, July 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sueseagull On Tuesday, August 24, 2010, sueseagull (5)By person wrote:

    Very lovely and well written poem. A true pleasure to read.

  • A former member wrote: nicely done

  • sixsixnine On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    your work cutting atoms .. this is another demonstration of how deep & real you see things.. i'm loving it*

  • A former member wrote: time is a concept..the past is the future..and repeats itself. nice work.

  • A former member wrote: I think I'm going to look forward to your works.

  • mysticventures On Saturday, July 17, 2004, mysticventures (527)By person wrote:

    thank you for your encouragement - this is my first attempt at sharing my soul with the public.

  • Northstar On Saturday, July 17, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    this poem is very grounding--and very true--once again, nicely done.

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