Christine's Whip
By Crystal Passion
Crafted leather
Tightly braided
Slightly worn
the seams have faded
Three feet long
From tip to hilt
A work of art
Expertly built
And her smooth hand
So strong and steady
As I laid still
Bare-skinned, and ready
then tracing slowly
My naked side
Her senna whip
A painful collide
Screams of pain
Overcome by rapture
I was the prey
And she the captor
Stinging cracks
Leave their mark
Her timing precise
Her motions sharp
Now seeing all that
She had done
She licked my wounds,
Her passionate tongue
Then laid her toy
Above my head
And forced me farther
Into the bed-
-by all the weight
that was her own
bodies sweating,
I hear her moan
Her electric glaze
Never leaving mine
Her toxic touches
Having crossed the line-
-from friends to lovers
the choice we made
and no regrets now
since that day
and it's still hard
to remember when,
the time before her whip
licked 'cross my skin.
~*~ Dedicated to Christine, she's swell ~*~
Comments on "Christine's Whip"
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On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
Lovely lovely lovely!!! Thank you for writing this. So sexy and sensual and passoniate. Simply bliss... So sexy almost made me wet... ~*Kitty*~
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On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(976) wrote:
ohhh...i like this lots...i can relate...it went bad tho...oh well i like this alot kya
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On Monday, June 14, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
yeah, this one went bad recently.. *sigh*
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A former member wrote:
Jesus Christ on a popsicle stick, I didn't know you were bi? Mmmmm you yummyliscious asian you!!!
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
aww, lovely! girls in leather are so much better. ::Grin::
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On Sunday, April 25, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
prrrrrrrrr
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
Mmmmm I want to feel the lash of a whip....very hot piece here babe..always enjoyed...*lix*
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On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Drea
(1388) wrote:
Oooo logged in just to comment. Princess, looks like you have been having fun. Hummm, maybe there might be room for another Princess? *giggles* This was a HOT write. I love the flow.
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On Friday, April 16, 2004, flying_fox
(571) wrote:
this was great - original rhyme, great format... I can feel the sting as I read it.
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Seraphic
(209) wrote:
hot...this was hot and oh so very sexy, nicely done. *smiles* I've got to read it again....I need a meeting with someone and their whip now :) *~seraph~*
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
excellent, i think i have a boner
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, OLd SouL
(717) wrote:
oh my....goddess.. I mean goodness. :::OLd
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, worm
(1149) wrote:
I'd really like to come over and watch, but my pacemaker would probably burn out! wait a minute, hun! if I went out that way at least I'd be smiling!
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On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
WORMIE!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?? *SHAKES FINGER AT YOU*
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...um, can I say Hell Yeah...? oh wait, I just did...so, when can I come over...? lol -Darun
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
o0o0o wow...this is great!!~slave
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On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, Crying_Banshee
(62) wrote:
heheh =) nice i like it..