Christine's Whip

By Crystal Passion

Crafted leather
Tightly braided
Slightly worn
the seams have faded

Three feet long
From tip to hilt
A work of art
Expertly built

And her smooth hand
So strong and steady
As I laid still
Bare-skinned, and ready

then tracing slowly
My naked side
Her senna whip
A painful collide

Screams of pain
Overcome by rapture
I was the prey
And she the captor

Stinging cracks
Leave their mark
Her timing precise
Her motions sharp

Now seeing all that
She had done
She licked my wounds,
Her passionate tongue

Then laid her toy
Above my head
And forced me farther
Into the bed-

-by all the weight
that was her own
bodies sweating,
I hear her moan

Her electric glaze
Never leaving mine
Her toxic touches
Having crossed the line-

-from friends to lovers
the choice we made
and no regrets now
since that day

and it's still hard
to remember when,
the time before her whip
licked 'cross my skin.




~*~ Dedicated to Christine, she's swell ~*~

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Copyright 2004 Crystal Passion
Published on Tuesday, April 13, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sticky Kitty On Thursday, January 27, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    Lovely lovely lovely!!! Thank you for writing this. So sexy and sensual and passoniate. Simply bliss... So sexy almost made me wet... ~*Kitty*~

  • Malice In Wonderland On Wednesday, May 26, 2004, Malice In Wonderland (987)By person wrote:

    ohhh...i like this lots...i can relate...it went bad tho...oh well i like this alot kya Scholar

  • Crystal Passion On Monday, June 14, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    yeah, this one went bad recently.. *sigh*

  • A former member wrote: Jesus Christ on a popsicle stick, I didn't know you were bi? Mmmmm you yummyliscious asian you!!!

  • KittyStryker On Saturday, April 17, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    aww, lovely! girls in leather are so much better. ::Grin::

  • Crystal Passion On Sunday, April 25, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    prrrrrrrrr

  • A Velvet Tongue On Saturday, April 17, 2004, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    Mmmmm I want to feel the lash of a whip....very hot piece here babe..always enjoyed...*lix*

  • Drea On Saturday, April 17, 2004, Drea (1443)By person wrote:

    Oooo logged in just to comment. Princess, looks like you have been having fun. Hummm, maybe there might be room for another Princess? *giggles* This was a HOT write. I love the flow.

  • flying_fox On Friday, April 16, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    this was great - original rhyme, great format... I can feel the sting as I read it.

  • Seraphic On Thursday, April 15, 2004, Seraphic (209)By person wrote:

    hot...this was hot and oh so very sexy, nicely done. *smiles* I've got to read it again....I need a meeting with someone and their whip now :) *~seraph~*

  • _Andrew_ On Thursday, April 15, 2004, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    excellent, i think i have a boner

  • OLd SouL On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    oh my....goddess.. I mean goodness. :::OLd

  • worm On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, worm (1194)By person wrote:

    I'd really like to come over and watch, but my pacemaker would probably burn out! wait a minute, hun! if I went out that way at least I'd be smiling!

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, April 14, 2004, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    WORMIE!!! WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?? *SHAKES FINGER AT YOU*

  • SilentStalker On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, SilentStalker (1067)By person wrote:

    ...um, can I say Hell Yeah...? oh wait, I just did...so, when can I come over...? lol -Darun Scholar

  • murder_in_clubland On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    o0o0o wow...this is great!!~slave

  • Crying_Banshee On Tuesday, April 13, 2004, Crying_Banshee (62)By person wrote:

    heheh =) nice i like it..

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