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Homogeneous presence
By Dancing_Monkey
I downfall, Inclosure
Ignis fatuus, floating digest
Driven citylights
In plated obsession
I race my hand
Acknowlede one' presence
Tin can of maggots
Womb of insecurity
Dream beings, healing depth
Doubt; A shiver yet spineless
Prayer beads on holy ground
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Copyright 2004 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Saturday, April 10, 2004.
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Comments on "Homogeneous presence"
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A former member wrote:
this is all.devouring, and cerebral in its reading, its mainline configurations and demensions/ dementia. . . . and i am so partial to that closing couplet. wish you'd post more.
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A former member wrote:
Phenominal. I want to go to sleep and dream this poem.
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On Tuesday, February 13, 2007, Sin
(1168)
wrote:
jesus...you dont mince words...everyone of your writes are like bullets, you blow my mind Monkey man ~kristy
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On Monday, November 28, 2005, Grim_Sorrow
(75) wrote:
Leaves much to the imagination... Love it
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
"Tin can of maggots Womb of insecurity Dream beings, healing depth" so thick with imagery and force.. the way you word things is exquisite, and this has wrought me speechless.
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A former member wrote:
I think this has a wonderful flow...it's just so graceful...I love your choice of words...it makes my mind's eye work like mad to make images to match everything you speak of. Nice.
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On Thursday, April 15, 2004, urbanhumility
(1175) wrote:
internal meaning, beautiful prose......so very well done......urban
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
Brilliant. Poetry that makes you think. My mind is feeling something (it hasn't in a while) a tingling sensation. Monkey, you're awesome..such talent (not shocked) ^_^
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
i can say nothing more than this i agree and thank u
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, A Velvet Tongue
(436) wrote:
"Dream beings, healing depth "...the deoth we all long to find....but are these beings really coexsisting with us?..awesome piece my danish, Danish!!
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
hehe...funguy was right with the trance food, and it was indeed delectable :) sweet write, dude...loved it ^_^
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
The prayer beads fall lifeless in my head, dropping lonely to the ground...
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
I race my hand... Fractured and yet my mind takes heed and wanders/ponders on so much over so little, little in the way of length, but with so much more inside the words, inside the meaning
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
this is trance food ... the brain dosage directions ... steering to a possible crash before waking ... eyes open , nervous and disposessed - don't believe me? ... then say whoops .. i didn't realize i made a weapon ... nice job monkey man ,,, nice job .f
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
glad to see you bending brains again ... funguy
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, worm
(1194) wrote:
DM... a flash of brilliance! metaphors abound! one thing though... what does "Ignis fatuus" mean? (please enlighten the dummy!)
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
'ignis fatuus' = 'the foolish fire' :) one of my favourite little latin moments... This piece is great; i like capt's comment of 'trance food'... i agree... very nicely done.
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Drea
(1443) wrote:
"Tin can of maggots/Womb of insecurity" I really liked Monkey. Nice to see your block was broken.
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On Saturday, April 10, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
monkey my man you haven't lost a single thing since your last post.*tin can of maggots womb of insecurity*fucking brilliant my friend,fucking brilliant.****well deserved.much love-chris
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