Untold Prophets

By sweetambrosia

Have you ever noticed
how a child can love

unconditionally

they can see a person,
a total stranger,

crying

and it matters not
who that person is
man or woman
color of skin
belief in religion
status of life
it only matters
that they are

crying

and all it ever
seems to take
is a hug and a

smile

to make life right
when it comes from a

child.

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Copyright 2004 Amber N. S. Hill
Published on Wednesday, March 17, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A poet of madness On Friday, May 25, 2012, A poet of madness (115)By person wrote:

    if we all had the eyes of a child, we would all see the world for what it is and could be

  • Meshell On Thursday, December 29, 2011, Meshell (34)By person wrote:

    beautiful write!! i agree that we should look at life as if we were looking through a childs eyes.

  • GreekPhilosopher On Monday, May 17, 2004, GreekPhilosopher (156)By person wrote:

    Simply Beautiful. GPhD.

  • Dancing_Monkey On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    :o) all's been said.

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, April 10, 2004, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    i like this, its so true childeren are the truest form of kindness and purity i'm adding this so please dont ever take it down

  • Blinded_Tiger On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    I love you for making this :) This is just about all I hope for people to ever see. From that everything els can come. Thus the headline aswell. And again people like you that see this, are to me the same in everything as the child in mention.

  • Blinded_Tiger On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    People that see a way of live/feel/be, that often seem hiden to some. Tiger

  • Solace On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    ethics! Bah there is no such thing as morality, decency or ethics these days bar perhaps in the innocence of a child, prophets indeed they be but who of the blind shall see?

  • Solace On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Solace (1069)By person wrote:

    Damnit!!! Makes me feel sick to live in a place were we are "conditioned" into racism, into enequality, into closing our emotions away so as to be selfish and guarded against those that need it most...Fuck this insecurity and the dependence on social ethi

  • flying_fox On Thursday, March 18, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    so true, and beutifully expressed. I read a story about a four year old whose next door neighbour (an elderly lady) had died. The lady's widow sat crying in the garden, and the child climbed up onto his lap.

  • flying_fox On Thursday, March 18, 2004, flying_fox (573)By person wrote:

    And when the child returned to his parents, they as,ed what he'd said to the old man. He said 'nothing. I was just helping him cry.' Beautiful stuff. Fox

  • Mistress Morbid On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    That is so true, although I do not have a child to bring me those pleasures. Well done. =) Morb

  • Lord Kalgalath On Wednesday, March 17, 2004, Lord Kalgalath (182)By person wrote:

    mmm how true...i like this... we should all be so like children.. the world would be better

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