For Dan

By flying_fox

Such words you bestow
upon me, around me
with lacivity and calm
great with intellect and thought

Letting me envelope you
accepting of my flaws
oh, so many flaws
your gaze is lovely

warm blue and cool red
surrounding me
protection in your voice
desire in your touch

you make me feel special
a designer piece
made just for you
to you, I am a diamond

Such kindness is rare
deep sincerity a treasure
these feelings immeasurable
I give myself

to you

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Published on Tuesday, February 24, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "For Dan"

A former member wrote: Aww I can agree when people are willing to put up with our bullshit they are keepers. Loved it :p ~Ryan
On Tuesday, May 4, 2004, Guttercat (30) wrote:

dang... Ima feeling a tad jealous here... ;p *sigh* if only I could find someone who makes me feel that way...
A former member wrote: a very moving, compelling work. your talent, perspicacity, and beauty scintillate through those diamond facets (and your beautiful from the outside too, if i might humbly add). you make Dan a wealthy fellow with your choice.
On Tuesday, March 30, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405) wrote:

Aw, this was sooooo sweet. =) Morb
On Monday, March 29, 2004, girlafraid (479) wrote:

you don't look like you have THAT many flaws :) I sincerely liked this sweet and touching piece...
On Monday, March 29, 2004, flying_fox (571) wrote:

flaws aren't always visible...but trust me, I have those too!!! Fox
On Wednesday, March 31, 2004, girlafraid (479) wrote:

nah...you're too nice ;)
On Thursday, March 18, 2004, Lynaes (854) wrote:

Aw.. Such a touching, delicate, beautiful way to convey togetherness. Gorgeous, so heart warming! -L
On Sunday, February 29, 2004, capt_funguy (777) wrote:

still a diamond i can see from here ,,, very sweet write ,, nice to read hap .. hap.. happy stuff ... funguy
A former member wrote: I love the wording of the second to last stanza especially. Very beautiful piece. ~Ship!
A former member wrote: yeah i agree its lovely! you must have been through every emotion while composing this i like it :) well done --
On Tuesday, February 24, 2004, purr_verse (1052) wrote:

ohh...this is so lovely. And you are a diamond, of course. :) purr