Fingertips...

By A Velvet Tongue

There..
On the tips
of my
fingers
just out
of reach

a rush..

ready to devour
captured breath
a golden
thread
spun
of delirium

floating
in yen..
well traveled
as it connects
to acquiescence

an eyelid
flutters
lush lips
follow a wink
towards banter

a smile
graces
racing a chakra
to the core
of you..

locking..

two gazes
to flood anonymity
impregnating..
Venus's
hunger

come
closer still
your scent
lingers..
I know you..
your name..

breathless

..it's on
the tips of my fingers....

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Published on Thursday, January 15, 2004. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Fingertips..."

A former member wrote: This is practically perfect. Wow.
On Sunday, March 27, 2005, A Velvet Tongue (434) wrote:

that is kind..thanks..i was just feeling...sometimes its hard to feel..love ya hun *muah*
A former member wrote: This is so wonderful, i love it!
On Saturday, January 17, 2004, Ideas (50) wrote:

I'm at a loss for words even after reading it a second time, what more can I say? Wonderfully done.
On Friday, January 16, 2004, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

This one is haunting me Vel. No, in a good way. Excellent write.
A former member wrote: acquiescence - I LOVE that word! what a great piece...the flow is stunning and mesmorizing..damnit, can't spell this a.m.
On Friday, January 16, 2004, birdwell (138) wrote:

"breathless", evoking simplicity, an exquisite thing ~db~
On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Drifter (265) wrote:

I feared reading this b/c of the adverse effect your works have on my pants :) Anyway this is more than i expected and exactly the kind of poetry i enjoy. Awesome...(and i didnt wet myself!)
On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti (340) wrote:

A very spacy write...enjoyed this very much...-l-