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Fingertips...
By A Velvet Tongue
There..
On the tips
of my
fingers
just out
of reach
a rush..
ready to devour
captured breath
a golden
thread
spun
of delirium
floating
in yen..
well traveled
as it connects
to acquiescence
an eyelid
flutters
lush lips
follow a wink
towards banter
a smile
graces
racing a chakra
to the core
of you..
locking..
two gazes
to flood anonymity
impregnating..
Venus's
hunger
come
closer still
your scent
lingers..
I know you..
your name..
breathless
..it's on
the tips of my fingers....
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Copyright 2004 Beverly L. Hernandez
Published on Thursday, January 15, 2004.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Fingertips..."
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A former member wrote:
This is practically perfect. Wow.
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On Sunday, March 27, 2005, A Velvet Tongue
(436)
wrote:
that is kind..thanks..i was just feeling...sometimes its hard to feel..love ya hun *muah*
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A former member wrote:
This is so wonderful, i love it!
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On Saturday, January 17, 2004, Ideas
(50) wrote:
I'm at a loss for words even after reading it a second time, what more can I say? Wonderfully done.
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
This one is haunting me Vel. No, in a good way. Excellent write.
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A former member wrote:
acquiescence - I LOVE that word!
what a great piece...the flow is stunning and mesmorizing..damnit, can't spell this a.m.
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, birdwell
(140) wrote:
"breathless", evoking simplicity, an exquisite thing ~db~
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On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Drifter
(268) wrote:
I feared reading this b/c of the adverse effect your works have on my pants :) Anyway this is more than i expected and exactly the kind of poetry i enjoy. Awesome...(and i didnt wet myself!)
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On Thursday, January 15, 2004, Spiritus_Frumenti
(341) wrote:
A very spacy write...enjoyed this very much...-l-
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