tachycardia

By Jonas

shake the vice
tying
your heart to your
heels

it isn't worth
dying
though that's how it
feels

***

i am the son
of beltane's fires
i am the sire
of jealousy

i am the weal
of sensual back-fire
to touch the spire
of apathy

i pray

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Copyright 2004 Fish
Published on Friday, January 9, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: "i am the son of beltane's fires".. I'm really feeling this.. It's very intense and slightly.. Witchy, If you know what I mean. ~Wish

  • KittyStryker On Friday, January 16, 2004, KittyStryker (711)By person wrote:

    charged. when i read this, i feel energy crackle in my heart... sinister. feeling is rough going.

  • Stranger On Friday, January 9, 2004, Stranger (264)By person wrote:

    It is my guess, that to truly understand this poem, one would need a mistress and dictionary.

  • Jonas On Saturday, January 10, 2004, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    one would only need to feel things a bit too deep sometimes and wish (though not really) not to feel

  • Griffin On Tuesday, May 11, 2004, Griffin (114)By person wrote:

    whooo... i dont know what to say... but i enjoyed reading it

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