Fallen From Grace

By Methos

at nineteen she stood, a woman by right
dressed in garbs of white, she steps off
to effectuate her dreams, simply put, to achieve
her soul incandescent, shining the path before her
negligent to the world, its cruelty, its deceit
a sacrificial lamb, setting out to the slaughter

twenty one, not the dream she had envisioned
confused with the dire obstacles littered around
that have battered and beaten her along this journey
she sits underneath gray clouds, resting her jaded mind
the path longer and more incomplete than expected
a wounded soldier, on the path to defeat

twenty three, weeps into the wild air
now she lies in darkness’s dreary realm
wrapped in blackened leather, innocent no longer
her life guarded now, too much pain infiltrated
the heart she once held high, now, left behind
a death row sentence, no parole in sight

twenty four, unearthed itself for her
lost and alone, merely wrapped in rags
a path no longer in sight, fences line the horizon
she sits upon the bleak pavement
absorbed with the contents of life
another homeless, people passing by, trying not to witness

twenty five, bleeds into her universe
a draft of life blows, as cold as the blade
she wields in her freezing hand
slowly without remorse her life
ceases…..
another unmarked grave, in societies blind eye…








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Copyright 2003 Methos
Published on Wednesday, December 24, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Saturday, July 9, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this touched me and brought me to tears...theres nothing i can say to praise you that hasnt already been said...but i was here, i read, and i left in awe ~kristy

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, January 9, 2004, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    powerfull words that speak of a truth noone whats to see or hear, ur words make them see it make them feel it

  • CharlottesWeb On Sunday, January 4, 2004, CharlottesWeb (509)By person wrote:

    The landscape you wove together with the passing of time and innocense was very affective. I felt I saw/witnessed the ages pass into awareness of different sorts for her. Enjoyable read...but so very sad. ~JMDW~

  • A former member wrote: Ahh the depressing way in which time passes.. This is brilliant, with a beautiful ending. ~Wish

  • A former member wrote: I think I read this 3 times now. This is chilling in it's reality and sadness.

  • Ophelia On Friday, December 26, 2003, Ophelia (221)By person wrote:

    saddness grabs at you from every verse and it holds you calling you back, very nice...........................O.

  • xX pretty vacant Xx On Thursday, December 25, 2003, xX pretty vacant Xx (64)By person wrote:

    great write. i read this four times over and i could read it forever without getting bored of it. the sadness really fucking hits you, but it's kind of detached in a way. i really can't find the words to explain this. but i love it.

  • purr_verse On Thursday, December 25, 2003, purr_verse (1052)By person wrote:

    sad and effective, strong storyline/concept. powerful work. purr

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, December 25, 2003, urbanhumility (1158)By person wrote:

    a sorrowful plight, articulated in high fashion, i can sense great ages of pain; and helpless contemplation.....this as well as you are so very deep......well done poet.....urbanhumility

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