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a simple man
By -Oz-
a simple man have i loved
for i have seen the sun rise
and the sun set
all in the same day
but never have i seen anything compare
for he is the eastern sea
and the falling leaves
the snowing sky
and the blooming flowers
he is the petals of a delicate rose
from which a stem will follow
he is the moon
from which the stars obey
for he is my muse
i write for no other
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Copyright 2003 OZMA
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A former member wrote:
I havnt read anything of yours in years. Wow! This is amazing. I wish I could find inspiration like yours. Beautiful poem indeed. Congratulations on the POTD even though your not around anymore old friend.
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A former member wrote:
yeah i can relate, once you find someone there the 'one' good job
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On Friday, February 13, 2004, Methos
(121)
wrote:
Everyone must have inspiration....a deeply tragic poem, that leaves me to wonder if you will find inspiration elsewhere? There is a fine line between patience and madness....Great work...I truly enjoyed it...-Methos
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On Friday, January 16, 2004, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
This is my favorite of yours so far. Simplicity is truly powerful and gorgeous... particularly when tied to images of nature.
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A former member wrote:
*nods* When you are in love with someone, they become your everything. ~Wish
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A former member wrote:
I really like this one-its simular to my feelings for someone, my muse, but done like I could never do-Ashes
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On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Cwn Annwn
(89) wrote:
I think that was the deepest and most emotional piece that as brought me to tears.::::Runs away crying:::::~GoNe~
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A former member wrote:
I feel your pain, baby! :) I like it. it was realy pretty. I'll look foreward to hearing more from you!
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