This Night

By GreekPhilosopher

Lonely blue stars surround this night
Absorbing the silver eyed sight
Created by wandering minds
This night

Alone for all to see in the dark this night
Hounded by past mistakes shining bright
And simplicity fades
This night

Reason runs through my fingers this night
Deliberately false sounds cause fright
Sending hot chills
This night

Hours crawl feverishly through this night
Huge allegations close in tight

[And all I can wonder]

Will I survive
This night

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Published on Tuesday, December 9, 2003. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "This Night"

On Wednesday, July 9, 2008, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

I feel the calm terror that coats this piece with a sheet of ice- still and frightening.
On Monday, May 9, 2005, Kinkypoptart (555) wrote:

Great write ~*~tarT~*~
On Sunday, July 25, 2004, sixsixnine (476) wrote:

brilliant! feeling it so much******669******
On Thursday, June 24, 2004, blackdarkness (227) wrote:

great words...well done
On Tuesday, December 16, 2003, urbanhumility (1158) wrote:

a insightful moment within this night your speaking of......to grasp and gather words......in time of need, you have spoken well here........urban
On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, asailorsangel (34) wrote:

The anxiety caused by the thought of loneliness can make the paranoid voices in our mind run rampid - now you scared me...ASA~
On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, WinterGrave (258) wrote:

oh wow, the piece is great.~~~Grave
A former member wrote: that was really cool. i liked it alot! mwah!
On Wednesday, December 10, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213) wrote:

It is indeed a treasure. Well done. *Steals a gem and runs*.
On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Methos (121) wrote:

Very nice write. I relate to this poem. very good. -Methos